Pompadour

hi, love. take this review with a pinch of salt and a rim of lemon. i adore these pieces; they're packed with so much and it's an absolute pleasure to ...

hello. i'm going to make this a quick review, because i really should be in bed but this caught my eye, so. i like the sentiment you've got rolling here: ...

Hello. This lacks impact. My interpretation of this piece is that the narrator was in a toxic relationship that's long since ended, but they're now in a depressive state over ...

Hello there. A correction: this is not a blurb--it is an excerpt. A blurb is the short summary/hook written for promotional purposes on the back of a book. Seeing as ...

Yo. Going to keep this short. First off, meaning doesn't have to be clear in poetry. The poet may seek to convey a certain, concrete theme; they may not seek ...

Hi there. I'm back~ This is the strongest chapter as far as characterisation is concerned, mostly because Margo is finally begin to show signs of standing up for herself, albeit ...

Hello, Gust! Pomp here for a quick review~ Happy Review Day! The first thing I'm going to talk about is the syntax. The first paragraph is mostly a steady stream ...

Hullo~ I like how you introduced a conflict in this chapter, because I really felt that that was an element left lacking in chapter one. I'm not a big fan ...

here as promised~ my take on this is piece is that the poet has drawn a dialectic for us: the opposing forces of drunken idealism versus the havoc idealistic influences ...

Hello. Before I begin, I find it necessary to state that I ... generally tend to disapprove of prologues, mostly because they're unneeded and exist merely to up the hook ...

Hi, Amjad. Happy Review Day! I'm going to keep this short. I think your dialogue needs work--it reads as contrived and fake, because it spells everything out for us and ...

~Hoi. There are a few fluctuations in tense nearing the beginning of the chapter. Keep an eye out for those. I'm also a big fan of any and all yummy ...

Hi. Back again~ Happy Review Day! Ooh, I remember reading this chapter! I also remember quite enjoying that bit of description you have when Ria roams the city, and if ...

Hello! I'll make this quick, seeing as I don't have much to comment on this time around. Happy Review Day~ So maybe it's because I've taken a bit of a ...