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Re: Once Upon a December Night
Hello. I'll make this short. I think the idea behind this poem is captivating and charming, but the sticks-and-stones style it is written in does not do it justice. There's ...
Jul 27, 2018 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 2
I'm late, but hello again! So I read this as soon as I finished the first part, but I'll be re-reading as I review. I won't be scouring out any ...
Jul 26, 2018 -
Re: Connection - 2 (The Unholy Info Dump Pt. 2)
Hi again! If I haven't mentioned already, I absolutely love the atmosphere you've built here. It's calm and lulling--which is odd, considering how much of what we have been introduced ...
Jul 26, 2018 -
Re: Connection - 1 (The Unholy Info Dump)
Hello, fortiglump! Here as promised. I'm quite intrigued by the premise you've set up for this piece; cyberpunk as a genre is in itself so fascinating and mottled, and it's ...
Jul 23, 2018 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 1
Hello, Bisc! I haven't reviewed much prose in a long time, so pardon my ambling as I try to find a rhythm to how I tackle this. That being said, ...
Jul 23, 2018 -
Re: love
hello. this is an interesting piece. i like how it explores the concept that love as a subjective experience is not constrained in its definition--it is yet multi-faceted and complex, ...
Jul 17, 2018 -
Re: bw
hello, it is late and i should be in bed, so this review is going to be as succinct as i can possibly make it. welcome to YWS! conceptually, this ...
Jul 17, 2018 -
Re: ithaka
Hello, Stella! I haven't reviewed poetry in quite a while so pardon my tangential tendencies--hopefully this review will be somewhat helpful~ [If anything, this may end up becoming more of ...
Jul 9, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 1]
Hi, love. I haven't reviewed in quite a while, so please excuse my bumbling incoherence and typos. I always find it difficult to review short stories in fragments, mostly because ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Live and Don't Die
hullo, Lizz~ apologies for how short this review is going to be--life's got me in a twist so my brain is very scattered as of currently--but i'll try my best ...
Oct 31, 2017 -
Re: Anxiety
Hullo. Popping in for a quick review. It's late and my thoughts are quite scattered, so pardon my tendency to stumble into Incoherent Quagmire. This is obviously a personal poem ...
Aug 6, 2017 -
Re: we are all so tired
Hello. Pomp here for a quick review~ I'm going to make this short. The lack of punctuation throughout the poem and the alliteration-heaviness in the first stanza lends a slothlike ...
Jun 20, 2017 -
Re: she calls me selfish
hey, marms! i haven't reviewed in a while, so excuse the clunkiness. this might also be more like a commentary than a review? let's just see how it goes~ your ...
Jun 16, 2017 -
Re: fluent in//broken hearts//breaking hearts
Hi. This makes me ache; I read it twice, and I am now reading it for the third time as I review. I'm probably not going to be helpful at ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: Search For Peace Book 1 ~ The Great Separation Prologue
Hullo. Happy Review Day! I'm a bit rusty on reviewing, so please excuse disjointedness/any inconsistencies! That said, I'll try to help to the best of my ability~ I'm not the ...
Jan 29, 2017
