Pomeroy

Hey Derek! Thanks for being my final review of review day. Let's so if I can pump this out in the eight minutes left, haha. Firstly, this is a very ...

I wanted to critique this, but honestly I have no idea how to critique poetry. I think it's a way for one to express themselves that's completely unique to them. ...

Oh my! This was such an exciting read. I really applaud you for this part being full of so much world building and description, but being able to keep it ...

Hey hey! I saw your third chapter in the Green Room and figured I'd start from the beginning. I couldn't find any typos or anything throughout, so kudos to you ...

Hello hello! Pomeroy here to review your story. CHAPTER ONE I'm really enjoying it so far. I think your style is fun, and Ava's character makes me laugh. The way ...

Hey Elinor! I have review day to thank for helping me find this interesting bit here! From the authors note at the beginning, I'm assuming I'm missing a lot of ...

Hi Tawsif! Review Day has brought me to your story here. I hope my review can be helpful. It's definitely an intriguing start, leaving me with lots of questions. Your ...

Here for chapter 3! It was so much shorter compared to the other ones, so this will be quick, don't worry. "she held out the other to the boy." I ...

Hey, I'm already back for chapter 2! I might even get to chapter 3 tonight... This story is so fun, and I love the world you're building. I love Kkachi's ...

I saw one of your chapters in the green room, and was like, "Dang gotta go read the whole story." So here I am, starting with the first chapter. At ...

Dude, this is written so well. The emotion expressed in how it's written, and the tone of the narrative is something I love so, so much. I really only have ...

Hey hey! This was so good. I love the emotion and relatability that you write Katie with. The first paragraph especially had a powerful punch to it, for me. I'm ...

This is so good. It has a really nice flow to it that makes it easy and quick to read, and leaves you wanting more, which I definitely do! If ...

Hey hey! Thanks for writing this and posting it, I hope anything I say can be helpful. First off, I'd like to say I like the characters you have here, ...

Hey, MJ! YWS suggested I review the fourth chapter of this story, so I figured I would start from the beginning. This is a short chapter, so my review shouldn’t ...