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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Abduction

    Hi, The first stanza is about the villagers, who are warning the others of the child-thieves who are coming. The second stanza is about the child-thieves themselves. The last stanza ...

    Apr 16, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Film, Review Re: Zero Dark Thirty

    This movie hasn't come out yet where I am so unfortunately I can't read your article yet! :( But I look forward to after I have seen it. Pollarbear

    Jan 15, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: Serious Nonsense Pargraph

    I am always being picked up on grammar and punctuation by my reviewers so I'm just gonna stay silent on the whole paragraph thing that the other reviewers are talking ...

    Jan 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: To begin.

    Thanks a lot for your input! I'll deffinitely sort through to make it a more coherent piece. I guess what this is supposed to be is confusing. There is a ...

    Dec 21, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Individuality

    The point of this poem was to express my opinion on other people's opinions of individuality. I thought that using the lengthy words that all had a similar sound and ...

    Dec 20, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Culture, General Re: The Man's Man

    Thanks for the review :)

    Mar 19, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Abduction

    Really? Thanks a lot! I fell really strongly about the issue in Africa and wanted to write something about. It means a lot that you like it.

    Mar 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: A Story About War

    Hey, I really liked this. I like the symbolism though i wouldnt have picked up on it without your note (due to my lack of floral knowledge). Nice flow. Good, ...

    Mar 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Do

    Nothing wrong with this poem. Such an original idea and executed so perfectly. This is my favourite of your poems. It just is brilliant. No doubt at all. Thank you ...

    Mar 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That's So Gay!

    Agreed. Thank you very much.

    Mar 13, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, Narrative Re: Judgement

    I agree that everyone judges everyone all the time but I think you have put it in a rather negative light. When someone says "You can tell me, I won't ...

    Mar 13, 2012
  • Other » Humor, Humor Re: Annoying Qualities of Boys

    I agree with master. This is inaccurate, rude, sexist and just stupid. Boys are not all the same. The fact that you are so negatively stereo-typing us is insulting. Also, ...

    Mar 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Secret Slogan

    If YWS would let me 'like' this twice that still wouldnt be enough. BRILLIANT!

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Confessions Of A Wallflower

    Haha this is great! I can't relate to it but I can empathise with you. Nice work as always. very funny.

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Sun

    Very very nice. I don't have time to review now but I really like this. You are talented.

    Nov 15, 2011


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