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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shoes

    Starting my review, what is Lifeblood? Also in my mind, as I was reading the poem, I had a slideshow in my head. I also could see you in it. ...

    Sep 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Princess's Feet

    Review time from Pokemon! I didn't expect THAT. I completely forgot what a haiku was until you made this. I can picture a princess with blonde hair, white/pink dress, and ...

    Sep 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Four Foot Three

    Review time for me! Starting my review.....THIS WAS SO CONFUSING. the beginning I could only picture a bad looking girl on a train. Try changing the words, and also the ...

    Sep 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Life.

    I hope you know that this is a review! Where did you get the idea of this? I thought that it would just be long enough to write a good ...

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Supernatural Re: Werewolf's Lament

    I REALLY liked this poem! It was like you told what a werewolf thought and saw. You made it sounds like the wolf did not want to hurt anyone else. ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Time

    Hi Dragofriend! I just noticed that you wrote this! Starting my review.......I liked how you described time with sun,moon,wolfs cry, and other stuff. This is a VERY short poem. This ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: My First Love

    I liked this uh....OH I FORGOT IT WAS A POEM! So I liked this poem. It sounded very sad, and.... I thought you would say bad things about him. While ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rain doesn't fall in the desert

    Starting my review is a question. What does To will the rainclouds back mean? The parts I liked were hm......I'm rereading it just in case I missed something. I don't ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I thought

    I liked this poem! I can picture this poem in my head.......a best friend running away. This now makes me feel very sad..... I think you could add more, like ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bye Bye, Big Blue

    This is a review made by me! I am starting to think that this is a Poem which has not made it to the Poems section yet. Are you calling ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Candy-stringed

    You can't tell but, this a review..... My review is starting.................now! Well, actually it already started before that, but I just want to make it sound fun. I can picture ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Foxtrot

    I start my reviews like:I am doing a review starting...............now! When I saw the title Foxtrot, I was like WHAT THE GINMOIG IS FOXTROT? I saw that it was a ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Fluke Kingdom

    This is how I start my reviews:I am doing a review starting.............now! That was the end of how I start my reviews. I am only reviewing this because I like ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Land Called Fear

    Hello this is a review about the beginning because I have not read ALL of it yet. Just part of it I have read.... I liked the beginning where it ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Episode 6, Lasting happiness.

    This is once again, another review! I hear you're on the second season. THAT MEANS MORE REVIEWS FOR YOU! You put dicided instead of decided. You put what's was instead ...

    Sep 15, 2013


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro