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Re: Till Sunrise
Hi Evermore. Your story listing in the Green Room really intrigued me because it reminded me of a popular book that’s out right now called You’ve Reached Sam, which also ...
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Re: A Dangerous World
Hi NothingMore905. Below are a few thoughts I’d like to share with you after reading your piece: The message in your first paragraph is intriguing; the world protecting itself from ...
Dec 19, 2022 -
Re: Letter Between Journeys
Hi Liminality. I don’t normally review poems because it’s not my strong suit but I was intrigued by yours. The text design of your poem is very eye-catching and gives ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: Imagine
Hi Dipro. I don’t usually review poetry because it is not my strong suit but I was intrigued by yours and I wanted to share some of my thoughts after ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: A most peculiar Christmas…
Hello Vampricone. I was intrigued by your story because I don’t see the Christmas horror trope very often. When I read your introduction describing the background of “Laughing Jack” I ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: MY DEAR FRIEND.
Hi Jisrahinav. I'd like to share some thoughts after reading your story. Overall impression: You employ a surreal use of immersive prose. The story is enigmatic with limited context on ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: second best - chapter one: a rocky start
Hi Julianna. I’m here with some thoughts I’d like to share after reading your first chapter. As you alluded to in the beginning, I have a few recommendations for improvement ...
Dec 14, 2022 -
Re: A Warm Embrace
Hi Elli. This story felt like a warm embrace, peeling back layer after layer of the protagonist’s fondest memories. Before I delve into my overall thoughts of your story there ...
Dec 13, 2022 -
Re: Our Tune
Hi Johnny. After reading your story, I have a few thoughts I wanted to share with you. Spoiler alert: I really liked it. Providing exposition in the beginning about how ...
Dec 12, 2022 -
Re: Lady Alberta and the Missing Prince (Part 3)
Hello Plume. The finale I've been looking forward to but took way too long to finally read and review. Let's do this! ** I am going to review a little ...
May 3, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Prologue
Hey MaybeAndrew. I have read some of your other pieces before and I am excited to discover that you've been writing a novel. Let's dive into this review shall we! ...
May 2, 2022 -
Re: Arrival
Hi Pandacow. First off, interesting username - pandas are definitely one of the coolest animals in existence. Okay, onto the review! I like how you start the story off in ...
May 1, 2022 -
Re: To Sit on the Edge of the Moon
Hi Yellow Sweater. I do not typically review poetry but your title immediately captured my eye and after reading it I definitely have some thoughts. Your descriptions are ethereal and ...
Apr 30, 2022 -
Re: Whale Hunting on Saturn
Hi MaybeAndrew. As an April Fool's joke this story had extensive depth, so much so it could submerge a thousand Sun whales (excuse my sad attempt at punny humor). Onto ...
Apr 28, 2022 -
Re: i am always writing about stars
Hi WaywardxWanderer. I am completely entranced by this piece, the title of which having initially intrigued me because I too admire the stars. I am not used to reviewing poems ...
Apr 25, 2022
