PoeticGlow

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I'll be sure to take in all of your suggestions, and try to fix this piece up! -PG

Thanks! :) This poem came from the heart, so I didn't put too much thought into it. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the feedback. I'll be sure to take out the "dwell" part. As for "solution", I know it may sound like it doesn't fit very well with the poem, ...

helenelizabethclarke- Your feedback to my poem was brilliant. I couldn't agree more when you say that real-life situations are the best things you can right about. That's my mission: To ...

No need to apologize! :) After all, I wanted to see what reviewers think. I really like the suggestions you've given me, and I'll be sure to modify this. I ...

Powerful stuff! I really enjoyed the two opening lines. I think you did a great job! -PG

Gahks- I never really thought of it that way! I really like your suggestions! I'll be sure to keep that in mind for future poems! Thank you. :D Hassan- To ...

Thanks :) Stuff like this is where I can pour all my heart into.

Thanks for commenting. To answer your question, what I'm "fearing" is myself. To explain, I blame myself for my Dad's death. You see, he was an alcoholic, and he was ...

I like this piece, a lot. It's very deep. I always enjoy a short poem. Although, it could be better, maybe a better choice of words is in order? Other ...

Very powerful stuff you got going on here! Other than the suggestions that Explosive_Pen gave you, well done on this!

I appreciate the honest feedback, guys. :) I might improve this piece sometime!

Beautiful write! :D