PoeticGlow

I like this a lot! It's full of that "raw" emotion! Here's a minor suggestion though: "Do you know anyone who has? Do you think you're close to finding?" Close ...

This a good piece! It surely has a lot of potential! However, it can be greatly improved/expanded! Agreeing with Kafkaescence, I think you should consider modifying your conclusion; it's seems ...

Short and sweet is always nice! This is simple, but very heartfelt! As for suggestions, my favorite line that you wrote, the 3rd line, ironically had one minor error: "Let ...

RayneBow, I love the simplicity of this poem! Your word choices were casual, and yet, they bring such an impact! Each and every line was pared down nicely; I can ...

This is good! Short, but very powerful! I really like the last three lines, knowing what you have when it's finally gone- a bit cliché, yes, but you made it ...

Well done, sir! You have some good imagery going on, and as well as good repetition! Here is my only suggestion though: "Idle words and idle hands Strangers in forgotten ...

This is very good, brokeninpieces! Good flow throughout, deep imagery, and good diction! As kakagirl stated, the only error however is that minor typo! Other then that, bravo! I like ...

This poem is very, very beautiful, from beginning, to end! It reminds me how I too turn to God when I find myself in conflict, even though my faith isn't ...

Breathtaking. Simply breathtaking. I'm sure that they're many who can relate to this. I know I can. Stanzas 2 and 3 are by far my favorite. You have a gift, ...

WOW :shock: You've done an excellent job here. This piece is just wild with feeling! I just have a question about this line: "Do I surrender, is that down to ...

I enjoyed this :D The last stanza is most powerful! Beautiful. Although, it can be improved. I agree on what Hassan said by expressing complex feelings with simple words. I ...

:shock: This poem is amazing! Truly, I'm speechless! You have talent, there's certainly no doubt about that! I enjoyed this so much...And I can truly relate to what you're saying ...

This is really beautiful. You did an outstanding job. I really love the message your giving. I know that feeling of wanting to move on, and how the things we ...

I enjoyed this...I write a lot of dark poetry myself, and I must say, this is a pretty good piece. Maybe it could be a little longer? You know, just ...