PoeticCowboy

Thanks Lylas, and the reason why I don't use curse words is because I don't like myself represented as a person who uses a lot of curse words. Thats why ...

I hope this is better TheSilverFox, and you are not coming across as rude, because you are not that kind of person. You are coming across as truthful. And I ...

I have changed it, so I hope you like it.

Thanks for the review TheSilverFox, and I am hoping that the changes that I have made to this is better. I was hoping that this would have a little more ...

Thanks for the review Sis, and thanks for the compliment. For the indenting, that is a mistake I take in editing for the format on this site. As for the ...

Sorry It took so long to reply, I have been super busy, anyways yes it is off of Ella Enchanted. My sister and I love that movie so I just ...

Thanks jessiebear for the review and I did not know how to actually spell terds and Microsoft Word didn't either, so I just went with that.

I use Microsoft word to write my poems, and I use a new paragraph for every line, so it automatically capitalizes the first letter of the sentence.

Changes are made and I hope you like it now.

I will go to many poetry sites and I will improve. I made changes so I hope you approve.

Changes made and I hope it is better.

Thanks for the review Lylas. I was asking my family how I could do like a teaser type of thing for the mom, and they said this was the best ...

Thanks for the review NympheaLily! The rest of the story will unfold here soon, and in the 7th chapter the rest of Karker's secret life, his old life actually, will ...

Thanks Questio for the review. I will be taking your advise for the rest of the chapters I am writing.

I have the next 6 chapters mapped out with incidents and all that, you will see. I am so evil. Jk. The next chapter will come out Monday.