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Re: My Name Is Alex Paynes
Thank you for your response! It is titled that just because I couldn't think of anything else lol. And you're totally right about the "using a school computer at night" ...
Jan 15, 2019 -
Re: Lestrade's Riders (Introduction & Chapter 1) *UPDATED*
I can't wait to read them! :)
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: Lestrade's Riders (Introduction & Chapter 1) *UPDATED*
Wow! That was a quick response! Maybe you could set it on a different planet? Or keep it on earth, but change the geography and history into something more dystopian/middle ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: Fire Starter
Oops! I forgot to to check the tags on this! Novel or not, it's still a great story! I'd love to read the ending when you find it!
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: Excerpt From An Unfinished Novel
Thank you for the review! You bring up a lot of good points! :)
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: The Enchanted- Prologue
Please ignore this comment, I accidentally posted the review twice. Silly me!
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: The Assasin War Ch. 1-6
Thank you for such a detailed review! The whole reason I post my writing on here is to get constructive criticism so in the future I can do better.
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: .
It may be just because I haven't read many poems without capitalization so I feel that it has to have capitalization.
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Your Majesty, Your Grace
Thank you for such a detailed review on my poem! I understand where you are coming from, when you say that the middle seemed forced. It was 1am and I ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: I:The Room
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Nov 30, 2014
Can I just say something? Wow. This was amazing. It was short and beautiful. It got to the point quickly instead of drawing it out into a billion paragraphs. I ... -
Re: The Nightmare Man
This story was beautifully told. The descriptions made me get chills up my spine. Not many things can creep me out as much as this story did. I do have ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: The World Behind Our Eyelids
Very good!
Nov 12, 2014