PinkPanther

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Hey! Panther here to review!

Sorry if I sounded too critical, I really DO like the poem!

It was a bit juvenile, and lacked depth, but it was fun to read. In many places, I got the impression that you wanted to make it rhyme rather than ...

Hey! So - I liked the first 3 lines, then "They attack when I do,/They pry when I don't." seemed out of nowhere to me. It makes sense, and it's ...

Alright, so lets do this. First of all, you've gotta say "Makeup IS something she does not..." because otherwise the "For..." in the next line doesn't make sense. In line ...

I like it. It's certainly well written. The word choice is amazing in most places, though in some I got the impression that you were trying too hard to be ...

Oh wow that was shoking at the end. It took me a minute.

Sorry about the empty box earlier, it was a mistake. I understand the mood you were trying to set but perhaps there was too much repetition on the point that ...

Thank you IcyFlame, as I mentioned earlier I'm not going to change the "o" because I want it that way, and not because I'm being clever, but because I was ...

Thanks for the review guys, Formslipper - I actually did notice it's a bit funny and ironic, but blotching out the "o" wasn't my idea of being clever, it was ...

That was the funniest thing!! Really refreshing after all this hard-core, self-loathig, pain-bitching bullshit!! LOL

thanks, you're so kind :smt004, sapphirewednesday...

very cute. First i thought it was acctual letters as in the mail, but then i realized it's letters as in the alphabet! classic!!