PiesAreSquared

Hey Lucrezia. Here I am for my seventh review of today!! Big accomplishment...but I repeat myself. Anyway on to your piece. There is a total of 967 words according to ...

For a novella, I would consider this part extremely short. Even were I to consider four parts, I would still categorize this as short. You make a smart move splitting ...

Here is the last review from me this week for you! After this I need to rush to support my team with other reviews! Let’s talk about character believability for ...

Back to the review table for me! This is another great piece, as usual. I am going to skip over any grammatical mistakes if they are of the same form ...

Need I say first of all. Welcome to YWS. You will improve by leaps and bounds, if you put the effort in. I can assure you of that! ...I can ...

Here again! Another chapter. Another few hours! (Just a FYI :P) IF I CAPS something, I’m not trying to shout, just putting them in bold, which I’ve forgotten...something like [b?][/b] ...

Alright here to review. This has been a fantastic chapter, enough meat but not too much, with a good bone structure. This chapter I feel has been rushed. Misspellings and ...

I finally grew some guts to place my poor reviewing skills at the service of this marvelous piece. The plot flows with a smoothness so perfect, cheese yogurt cannot even ...

I didn't get it in as a review the previous time. Hello there! You’ve been really busy writing in the two months you’ve been here! I had some trouble looking ...

There is something I would like to say prior to the main part of my review. Overall this has been pretty good but what is lacking is a good dose ...

Ok, I had some free time, and I just wanted to say a few things. The format makes it a little hard to pick out the start of a new ...

Ok, very well written, but first the nitpicks. The family hoped their information on the gangs was up to date, though they had paid a little too much for it. ...

Hi, today is review day and i’m here to review. Firstly, this is interesting (i find all things interesting). Well written, as it is compact. One thing i don’t like ...

Hey, it’s review day so i am here. Now this is an interesting piece, (do note that i find all things that i am interested in interesting). You don’t have ...

Hey, I’m reviewing because of review day. This is very interesting, (i’m always interested), It has good description, but it has the spelling errors here and there. ( I wonder ...