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Hello again! I'm back on my phone for this review and the next so don't expect them to come fast. I can type and read faster on a computer!! You ...

Madam de Pompadour! How nice to see the girl in the fireplace writing stories! Anyway, let me get on with this review! This is a rather interesting piece and I ...

Alright! Littlebunny! I'm here to review your work! Firstly, I really like how this piece flows. There is great harmony to the words. I had, however, difficulty finding where exactly ...

Hey wallflower! I love this poem. It really is well written. There is strong rhythm and a good description. Just a few picks. ...This generation’s clichéd “delinquent”.... Period comes before ...

Hey kittybee! So many people write poetry on this site that I find I have to review it! Great lets get started! Let's start with some rhythm. I will write ...

Hi subtle! ZLYF here to give a review for review day. This is a really good piece you have here. I can see why you're the featured member! I have ...

Hello Penguin! ZLYF here for another review! Let me get the rhythm correct first. 8 10 9 8 8 9 9 7 3 Alright, this is irregular poetry in my ...

Heyo Skinner! This is ZLYF here for a review! Possibly my last review of today. I've done a few! This is an interesting story, to say the least! First we ...

Only two reviews? Not good! Here's another one! I live nitpicks so here you are. ...I was walking home from school, just about a two mile walk. A normal, non-eventful ...

Four reviews of this work, and I still think it can benefit by one more! As I dislike having my own work left with stones unturned, I will scour through ...

OK ZLYF here to add another review! The first thing I notice is that this is really well written. Not rushed, a good thing (Whenever I'm not really into a ...

Let's rev this review day up! I'll start off, not with grammatical or spelling mistakes, for there are too few of those, but with suggestions. Suggestions I hope you consider. ...

Yay review time! Ok firstly your intro pre story has a few grammatical mistakes I won't give. However yuk do encourage u to enjoy this piece which is absolutely what ...

Hi WinterHawk! Here's me for a review! First of all I have to say that this is a creepy story. I don't like creepy stories but you really pull this ...

It would not be right if I did not review your book in its entirety! However, I will stick to what I find in the Green Room today. If you ...