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Re: Typo Alley~H Part One
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! I still think that you are have too much fun. Hobbits? XD Love it! Anyways, let's see what I can find. that would be ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Wonderful Day
Heya, Chrissy here for a review. Well, old Prince John being troublesome again? Or is it just the Sheriff? Time will tell, I suppose. Okay, let's see what I can ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: The Students' Homework ("Episode One")
Hey! I was just skimming and found something that jumped out at me, and had to say something. Plus, the ugly plain dishes don't help! They're so plain, and dreadful ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: The Planets are Dancing, the People are Dying- Chapter 1
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Wow! You really like end of the world stuff, don't you. Awesome. Well, let's see what I can find. "So... I'm sure you're all ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Letters 2 Our Heros
Heya, Chrissy here for review. I just want to say that you seem to have better luck with school assignment's than I do. I wrote one on the French revolution ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: legend one
Hey, Chrissy here for a review! Is this your first work? Wow! Good job. A couple nitpicks first. The door creaked to You're just saying that the door creaked. You ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: The Photo Chapter Three (part two)
Heya, Snazzy! Chrissy here for a review. On the back in scribbly writing was something I hadn't noticed before, How could she not notice it? Did it just appear there ...
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: The Superswagyrainbowboomerizer 1017
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! First off, just a few nitpicks. a machine that could stop time, and even a pet unicorn! A pet unicorn? Awesome. You might want ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 19
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! “We’ve made it to the courthouse. Good luck.” He tells us sincerely. After good luck there should be a comma, not a period. :) ...
Jan 1, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~B Part One
Chrissy here for a review! "Good grief. That high pitched noise almost made me jump out of my fur! You startled me. You forgot the quotation mark at the end. ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The hero of earth chapter 3
Hi, Chrissy here for a review! “Man why am I so weak?” I thought to myself. Comma between Man and Why. ;) “What was that?”The girl finally managed to say. ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 17
Chrissy here for review! I only read one of your works, so I won't be able to help on plot holes, but hopefully I can find some thing else to ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Typo Alley~G Part One
Heya, r4! Chrissy here for review. Just a few nitpicks, that's all. "It's one of my friends, RP." I reply. It's supposed to be a comma, not a period between ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Patchworld 1
Hey, Chrissy here for a review! I have a few nitpicks, but that's all. the way a candle can burns. You need to take the Can out of the sentence. ...
Dec 26, 2014 -
Re: Lauren's Fate
Hi! Chrissy here for a review. I have a few nitpicks. She was tall and slim, with long, brown hair and brown eyes. Maybe you should have either her hair ...
Dec 23, 2014