PickledChrissy

Hello Messenger! Chrissy here to rescue your work from its exile in the Green Room. My congratulations on having written and published thirty-nine chapters of your work. That is a ...

Hello Kaia! The first chapter of a new work. That's exciting! I can't promise to be a return reviewer, but I will give this chapter already here my best. I ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! It's an honor to review your first work. Your chosen topic is emotional and gripping, and extremely relatable. We've all been let down or betrayed ...

Hello Ley! Your second review from me today. Either congratulations or my condolences, you decide which. ;) Your command of words is admirable. You shape images and feelings both deliberately ...

Hello there! What a very interesting username you have. It is decidedly memorable. Your rhythm is brilliant. It bounces very much like a jazz piece. It reminds me of a ...

Hello Ley! Sheer beauty, that was my first impression. The rhythm and silent melody of the poem is visibly striking. There is a pulse to the work. Almost I could ...

Hello there! Long time no see, Messenger. I return from the grave to make a short return to the world of YWS. You have the dubious honor of receiving the ...

Hello Rebel, Your poem is concise and deliberate in its wording, delivering a very clear image and message. It is crafted with a chisel and seems almost to be built ...

Hello there! Don't worry about the lack of a name thus far. We've all been there. I gave one character the stand-in name of Eric. That was nine years ago, ...

Hello Rinisha! Who doesn't love blue eyes? This reads like a new love, and I am down for it. There is a unique beauty to blue eyes, and you put ...

Hello Rose, Once again, I am back to review a well-written work from you. You set the tone of the work right off the bat, a dark tone. The narrator ...

Hello FireSpyGirl, The title is instantly riveting. I opened it and was caught by the voice of the work. It is dark and filled with a sense of emptiness, of ...

Hello Rose! Who doesn't love/hate Netflix, depending on the day and the mood? Your choice of topic is imaginative and attention-grabbing, as well as having a wide appeal. I have ...

Hello There! Posting your work online for the critique of others is a deeply vulnerable action. Well done! You're young and have still managed to deliver a deeply imaginative work ...

Hello there! The hardest part about writing is the beginning. You've passed that point now and have officially begun. Congratulations on that! Poetry is a particularly hard skill to perfect ...