Phaix

hey Ben Franks :) lovely to meet you and happy christmas eve! well firstly I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this piece - you are a very ...

Hey Rubric, nice going here, this is really really good. Once again I have to comment on your amazing writing style, you have serious talent. Dont ever stop writing! I ...

I like this, I like this very much. It needs a little polishing, but that is easily fixed. You write well and with real feeling, so I as the reader ...

Hey! I'm phaix, lovely to meet you. I really enjoyed this, i hope there's more to come! I really want to know more about the house and what adventures it ...

Oh my word, I loved this. It was so simple and beautiful, and it really made my heart speed up! The ending was absolutely perfect. The repetition of "you're cute" ...

Good morning! I'm going to jump straight in with my review, I hope you dont mind! They named her Rain Sinclair when she was born. It meant that she was ...

Hey :D You write beautifully! You have a rare natural talent that has left me jealous XD I love Strick, he's a great character. I imagine him all stoic and ...

Hey! I'm back! This second part is great, however I'm a bit disappointed that it wasn't longer! Why exactly did you split it into two sections? The first part gave ...

Hey, this is really great stuff :) I read all the other comments, they seem to have covered quite a lot. However i did pick up on one mistake: "Tomorrow: ...

Hey AAAM! How are you today? I'm not going to cover any gramma or the such like, that seems to have been addressed already. Instead I'll gush for a bit ...

um...wow... I really enjoyed reading this! You are seriously talented and you must never give it up. Although it lost some pace in the middle I was really happy that ...

hey bluewaterlilly! how are you today? Firstly, I'd like to say that you really have something good going on here! You obviously love your story and genre, and the passion ...

hey aspiring.author! firstly...WOW! this was really, really good. You obviously have a natural talent for writing, and you have a brilliant grasp on drama. Your writing style and descriptions of ...

Hi! Phaix here :) Firstly, I really like your writing style. It's nice to read something short, snappy, and straight to the point. I can hear a cynical voice throughout ...

hi shadowlight! You obviously have a clear view of the scene in your mind, and I really felt your passion for describing it. Although not perfect, it certainly was beautiful ...