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I was euphoric when I finally finished the book. It was full of lols, fail, and so much Mary Sue-age. Bella's got so much Mary Sue going on that her ...

Heheh. Better late than never, right? >.> Of all the schools in Toronto, I have to choose one that is all the way out here on the St. Lawrence River, ...

Aw, boo, I wasn't here first. Technically, I shouldn't do this at all, considering you're my competition. :P *sigh* But I promised to throw love at it, so here it ...

I'm afraid to say I don't have as much to say here as I did for Part One. Justin's show of emotion is what's lacking in Matthew's segment and what ...

Hello, BBB! I'm here as per your request! I'll try to make this worth your while, but I don't think I can judge it very well without actually hearing it. ...

I am here with my critique of doom! Although, this really wasn't bad. In fact, I enjoyed it. :D Her long-lashed eyes fluttered open, and a smile play [s]ing[/s] ed ...

I am here, fair mademoiselle! Now, I tried to give you advice on what you said you had problems with, but I'm afraid I wasn't able to fulfill your expectations. ...

Hey Suzi! Sorry it took me over four hours to do this, but there were one or two distractions (dinner being one of them). By the time I was halfway ...

While this is an intesresting piece, it needs some work. Nothing a little help, editing, and practice can't fix, though. In the beginnig of the story you tell us what ...

Mrow! *huggles* That was wonderful. I absolutely love how the narrator replacing the angel was written. The whole thing was quite emotional. Grammar Nit Picks: The fact I'm not really ...

This is an interesting beginning. I like how it starts off with a conversation. It directs the my attention and gave me information without out-right telling. It also enticed my ...

They come to schools with little or no experience with magic. Perhaps "They enter magic school" instead of "They come to schools"? Because "come to schools" isn't a good phrase. ...

Aw, Suzi! You nearly made me cry! Although, it's mostly because I read "Bits and Pieces: Agatha" first and got to know her and her mind that way. If I ...

I love these. Especially the second one. This is terrible, but I started laughing after this sentence: The four year difference was smaller in comparison to the blood that was ...

I enjoyed the beginning, such as her digging into the man's heart, but by the end it was...eh. Yes, "eh." Maybe my awesome scale is a bit off (which you ...