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Percybeth

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Handwoven

    Thank you for this review! I will see what I can change to make it sound better. :) Happy Memorial Day!

    May 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: My Last Wish

    Ohhhhh! That makes a lot of sense. Thank you for making sure I knew that!

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Perfect Poem

    Amazing job. I really liked this. Not sure if I liked the last bit though: "This is the poem I wrote: ~ Life. But it does make sense and does ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the optimist

    Awwwww, thank you so much! Exactly what I was going for. And 'FABULOUS' is always a word that needs to be capitalized. :D

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freezing Rain

    Thank you for this reply! I love it! Haha and your gender assumptions are fine, I actually thought of it the other way around but I will speak to your ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Red Roses/Black Roses

    I loved finding this: "red thorns, black blood drips." Pulled that from your linked words. I like your use with words, but I found the bullets distracting me and I ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Other » Other, General Re: Mirror

    Hey, I love this review! It's so cute haha. The speaker is just a mirror across from a wall. And at first, this only had those three stanzas, but then ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Other » Other, General Re: Mirror

    Hey, thanks for this review! I wasn't sure if people would get what I was talking about, so I just made sure that they wouldn't be confused, should I still ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Rest in Paradise, my dear

    Thank you so much. I loved reading everything you said.

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Rest in Paradise, my dear

    Thank you so much. I love this reply. She was a Rottweiler, her name was Sophie.

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "Perfect" Chemistry

    Gah. In love with the science theme.

    May 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Roads

    Thank you for your suggestions! I'm going to edit and use some of your ideas! Just thank you so much for everything you said here.

    May 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Roads

    Thank you so much.

    May 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Falling

    Thank you so much for this. It's everything I was going for, but I never could have explained it better than you have.

    May 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Last Moments

    Really, this makes me cry. Last night my dog was put down. Her name was Sophie. She had cancer and broke her leg last night while we weren't home. I ...

    May 6, 2014


A day without sunshine is like, you know, night.
— Steve Martin