Percybeth

Zhia, Wow, I really like this! Coincidentally, I posted a poem/story here with the same title! #twinning! Moving on, I love the imagery you portrayed here, the feelings you emitted, ...

This is so freaking powerful. I love it so much. So much strength, so much meaning, so many bullet holes. I didn't want it to end. Wow, I just love ...

Hey Jony! Wow, I freaking love the imagery, and your way with words. I actually had to look two of them up! okay so I'm going to translate the poem ...

XDarkHeart27x, I really like how you structured this!! To me, the beginning is a cliff and the rest is that person falling and 'impact' showing a body on the ground, ...

Hey, stop being so hard on yourself! I noticed you just joined two days ago. It's okay. Maybe you were just nervous about your character description and the first chapter, ...

Milanimo What led me to read this poem was its shear title. And when I read it, I was not disappointed. I LOVE the detail you used, especially in the ...

Hey RockerTink96, I like how instead of talking about how the narrator was lost, you had them actually asking for help, behind a two-way mirror. Here's some quibble: I'm pretty ...

Trevorcofer, This is definitely not the story I thought it was going to be from the beginning! But once I read 'Human Corpse Inside' I obviously had to keep reading ...

Wow. Just, Wow. I love every word of this. While I was reading, I forgot all about the title and what this was suppose to be about. Instead I imagined ...

I love every line of this poem. My favourite, besides the ending is: "the crescendo of a pin dropping". I don't even know why it is. I guess cause it ...

Hey manisha! Great job. I did like this poem, it was different and interesting. The line that I liked the most was: Was that why the enemy warrior's stare stretched ...

OH MH GODS I LOVE THIS WAY TOO MUCH! I was thinking that it was just such a cute poem and then I literally gasped at "I love you too ...

I really just adored this poem. I wanted to cry, but I also wanted to read it seven times over, again and again. It makes me long for everyone I've ...

Heyy you finally found something to write about! ;D I really admire that you chose this kind of topic because I know you don't want your work to be forced ...

Hollyhuez, This is a really interesting poem! I loved the same like that Totypeawriter did. Here's my only suggestion: "They were both loaded with books with strange bumps on them, ...