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Re: Wishes For a Nameless Girl
There's a quote I read a while back and this poem reminds me of it. It reads: "I mean, they say you die twice. One time when you stop breathing ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Scary Things in Scarier Basements
I'm so glad you pointed this out for me to read! I enjoyed it, I was scared and I was laughing and I was in suspense. I think I like ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Falling asleep
Bonnie Babe, I really like the sound of this. It's like I get all the ways your trying to express this, but I can't quite grip them into complete sentences, ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: We're Alright
FiguringOutLife, This is cute, I like the idea. I was thinking of the song It's Alright by Fun while reading this. At first I couldn't tell it was a rhyming ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: 1
This is literally so cute, oh my goodness.
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Thunderstorm
Daisydreams, I really love this poem, definitely in love. I read it yesterday and was being a bit nitpicky and denied myself all of its wonders and enjoyment that it ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: In a room full of laughter..
Hey, Unique! This is a cute poem and surely not what I thought it was going to be, but in a good way! Because I thought it was going to ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: 1
Annaclare, This is a really cute poem! I LOVED the ending. It was perfect; I even got chills. My only problem was that I sort of got a little bored ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: You loved me broken.
This is really great. At first, I thought the title sort of meant that you loved me until I was broken, but I'm really glad that it isn't that way. ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hey Annaclare, Powerful poem! I love the imagery and the emotion. Favourite line right here: "her reality is drinking herself to sleep at night". It's so great cause you didn't ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: I am not curable
Hey queerelves, I like this poem. I like it because of its subject, it's so different from what I usually read on here. For every single stanza, I loved the ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: the ophthalmologist
Oh my goodness, the amount of love that I have for this poem is exponential ;) (Mrs. Barton talk). But really, I do love this. I love how (I'm making ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: My Last Wish
Woahhhhhhhhh. TheBlackSheep. I was not given a warning or was I prepared to cry while reading this. Well, I didn't officially cry, but my eyes were teary. I love how ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Boundless
TheSybarite, This is so adorable. I just love it. Definitely demonstrates passion, love, and endless merriment. I like how the length keeps the poem simple and lovely. I probably would've ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Happiness...
Zontafer, This is really neat! I really like how you wrote 'happiness' down the side. It gives me a nostalgic feeling from when I was a little kid, in school ...
May 25, 2014
