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Hello Ishan212, Here to review your poem entitled 'Fight' Overall I have a massive improvement to give you. It would sound alot better if you added a comma at the ...

Hello wordwing, Here today to review your piece entitled 'High school' As far as the spacing goes in your poem, I'm not too sure if you implemented that on purpose ...

Ok so I saw this in the short story section and knew I wanted to review it, after seeing your comment at the bottom of the page I've decided to ...

Hello Saruka, I'm here to today to review your poem entitled 'writers' block' I think i'll start and assume that the lack of capitalisation is a stylistic choice rather than ...

Hello Flumadiddle, I'm here to review your poem entitled 'Goofballs' - and the title is very important for this particular review Let's just say I'm a bit confused about how ...

Hello Pernicus, Here to review your piece entitled 'Four Knights' WOW. A pretty underrated word that sums up this poem to me quite literally. This poem is really good and ...

Hello Leafpool, I'm here today to review your piece entitled 'Monopoly' Straight away I could tell this was going to be an anecdotal inspired story and was eager to read ...

I feel like this is either deja vu or the binge reviewing catching up to me... Hello Flumadiddle, here to review your piece entitled 'Ring around the rosy' (again) I ...

Hello Flumiddle, I'm here to review your piece entitled 'We fall fall down' Reading through this I think you have done a pretty good job and haven't really got that ...

Hello Flumadiddle, Here today to review your piece entitled 'Terrified' So you used the anagram 'LISTEN' and am intrigued to see how these two words are connected I'm guessing this ...

Hello snowmonkey9, I've said it before and i'll say it once more, age is definitely an underrated thing in literature and the fact that you have written and published your ...

Hello Flumadiddle First of all I'm a bit confused about the whole follow up thing and would appreciate it if you would reply to me with your thoughts and insight ...

Hello woahhitherepal I'd like to first state that my recent absence on this website has taken the toll on getting back and reviewing poems, not that this affects you in ...

Hey Flumadiddle, Here for a short yet sweet review on your poem, so let's get straight into it TOGETHER HONEY - I noticed that straight away, this completely goes against ...

Hello StaticScum! Here for a short review of your poem today, so let's get started.... Random and well presented, I like this poem quite a bit! The fact that it's ...