PenguinAttack

Hi Ankush, I see you have quite a few reviews on this work but I haven't read them, I wanted to share with you my own thoughts on your poem ...

Hullo there, Maventemple, I appreciate what you're trying to do here. You're introducing a juxtaposition of ideas throughout the poem in an effort to encourage introspection on the part of ...

Hey Soulbrother, Just a quick review on this fine Review Day. You know I've not read the other chapters of this work, so I am running on little information and ...

Hey Autumns! So this is a nice essay, a piece of creative non-fiction that keeps the attention and moves fairly smoothly from one scene to the next. I like that ...

Hey There! So I've obviously not read the other chapters of this story and usually I'd go back and read and comment on them but I only have time for ...

Hey Pickle, Here for your second promised review, only a whole month late. I cheated and looked down to your response to Fortis to see what you said, so the ...

Yo Pickle, I'm here with the review I promised you LAST review day, literally a whole month ago. I'm shocking, I know, but there we go. Onto the review; So ...

Righto, onward we go. So the same issues I've been talking about apply here as well. This girl doesn't sound or feel like an older teen, which I'm still assuming ...

Yo yo yo So your characterisation. I'm going to be more critical/harsh/whatever now because it isn't improving like I assumed it would over time. Maybe because you've not had any ...

You're not surprised, I'm not surprised, let's get to it. I'm super glad that you're continuing on with a perspective! I want to assume the next chapter will also be ...

What's this? Me again? Hella gross, but that's the joy of Review Day! So you've swapped perspective again and I'm a little concerned that the next chapter is again going ...

Yo Messenger, Here for the next bit. How long was Cal on his raft by himself? Because it sounds like it was the case of one night? If so, why ...

Yo Messenger, I'm reviewing this even though you have a stack of reviews cause I don't feel I should move onto your second chapter without looking at this properly. You ...

Hey there Gray, I'm going to review this not just in terms of the conversation but also in terms of the content. Motivation is a complex and considered avenue of ...

Hi Uriah, So this is something else, hey. I'm not entirely sure what to make of it. To be honest, I'm not at all a fan of Seuss, so that's ...