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Hullo Jessa! I’ll admit right off the bat that rhyme isn’t really my thing! I have a personal grudge against it because I’m bad at it, I think. However, I ...

Hannahbobannah, It has been so long since I last reviewed prose, you’ll be lucky if I made hair or hide from this. Even luckier if you get anything from my ...

Hi Dragongirl! Now, I’m not the world’s expert on lyrics, I often listen to the sound without differentiating words! However, I’ve given your lyrics here a read through and I’m ...

EnchantedPanda! This is an absolutely wonderful poem! I am usually a mad hatter about rhyme in poetry, I just can’t stand it. Even not in poetry, it usually completely fails ...

Hi Babyla, It’s lovely to meet you, particularly with a poem! I like the idea you have here, identifying your love as a vice works well, very well when love ...

Hi there! I think you have a lovely poem here, which is full of a rich context which bleeds through at an excellent rate. Particularly when you hit with the ...

Hi Ashley! I love the imagery and the tone of voice in your poem. You have a very strong narrator here, whose persona takes charge and definitely drives the poem’s ...

Hey Wesley, I figure I will take you seriously and give this a proper review! It will likely be short, which is what happens with good, short poetry, there tends ...

Hullo IE, my dove. I’m sorry this is so late! I’ve got a bunch of comments down, and I’ll mention again that each line doesn’t have to be capitalised and ...

IE! Here we are again. I’ll start with the repeat of some basics: You don’t have to begin every line with a capital, and you absolutely need to add some ...

IE! My favourite little browserette, you told me I could tear into this, so I hope you’re ready for whatever it is I happen to say. I’m not sure what ...

Guuuuuuuh Nia, Why do you tell me that you aren't writing good things and then post this?! It's like, totes rude and stuff. My only nitpick, which I had written ...

Hello beautiful! I am less a fan of this than others. I think you're moving in and our of your comfort and that's good for you. I certainly enjoy the ...

Hello Nia, my love, I have come to this (at last?) It was only some months ago that I found out what ‘idk’ means, and I’m glad I know and ...

Hi Horus! This is a lovely little poem! I'll start by saying I very much appreciate your final stanza, which is where your true meat is. I haven't read Rydia's ...