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Hi Blogger! So I want to ask if this is based on personal experience or not. If only because I'm going to be a little critical so I apologise if ...

Hullo Lovesong, Fortis is right in that the voice you have in this poem is exceptional. It's a very strong tone and that is not at all easy to pull ...

Hey JayBlu, I know this poem is obviously very personal to you so I want to preface this review with the fact that I'm not commenting on the experience expressed ...

Maggie my love! I've come by to review this properly. I know we've talked about it but is review day and this is in the Green Room and I'm not ...

Hi Cara, Is there something going a bit wrong with your formatting? It seems like your final two lines are a cut off at the end there. This is an ...

Hey LINO, So I came to this thinking it was going to be a little silly because of the title, which is a very melodramatic title. However, I really quite ...

Hey Pternoha, This is an interesting piece you have here. The mixture of mediums and structure combine to create something I've not come across before. It seems to be an ...

Hey Strange, I checked in chat to make sure Marie actually has cancer. I think you don't need to add to the poem to make that clearer, it's something we ...

Hi Biluata, Here to review you on review day! How exciting. From this poem I can tell you like rhyming! I'm not at all a fan of rhyme, to be ...

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Yo Eveningstar! You're clearly throwing some spanners into the air with the perspective on this one. It's an interesting decision, to write a poem in the voice of a terrorist/religious ...

Hey Eli! We've cycled backward to the beginning! I know you're thrilled to see me here. :D This is a pretty non-eventful beginning to a script which seems to get ...

Hey Eli! Back again in reverse! Let's get stuck in. Why would Rosalie have any money for the movies? Like, Alison didn't appear to be sarcastic here so it just ...

Yo Ellie, I've read the other two parts of this script but have as yet not completed reviews for them. You get my commentary backward then! This script has left ...

Maggie! So I thought that since my other review was dismally overdue, I'd best get to this lovely thing as well! This has a way better sense of flow, of ...