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Hello!! This was an interesting concept. I have to admit, I never, ever would have thought of it. But you did, and that's pretty awesome. I'm not sure you intended ...

Hey there! I think this is a great Idea. There's so much negativity in the world, it's nice to have a breath of fresh air. This poem really was like ...

Hey! Just want to start out with, good job! I enjoyed reading it; the imagery was really good, vivid, and the rhyme scheme worked well with the structure. But where ...

Honestly... I liked it, but it was a little confusing. I'm not sure what this 'cushion' is. I was curious to find out, but I never did. That's a little ...

Really really good. I enjoyed the imagery, and the style too. I wonder, what inspired you? Just curious. I am a little confused about the line that says 'Red for ...

Hey!! Just popping in for a small review. I really loved the imagery in this poem, and even though I usually don't like this style of poem, I liked the ...

This poem is very good. It makes you feel something, even if you're not sure what. I like the formatting, and the way it flows. My only suggestion would be ...

I totally love this, and can completely relate. Completely. You're writing style is clear, and you say what you mean. I like that. Your formatting is interesting, but I feel ...