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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The True Monsters

    Thanks niteowl! I'll certainly work on it. As far ast possibly being a scam I just felt like I needed to get my work out there so it was worth ...

    Aug 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Daddy

    Wow. This is fantastic. I completely understand. I'm writing this with my dad on the couch next to me. No criticisms, no corrections. This was beautiful.

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Satire, Spiritual Re: Unicorns Exist

    That was a very fun, interesting read. Very different and somewhat odd, but good nonetheless and perhaps it is good for that very reason. Keep up the cool, quirky work!

    Jul 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate

    Beautiful. Simply beautiful. It is a literary masterpiece to rival the best. That darn mouse is just so inconsiderate, isn't he. I think you may take the cake for randomness. ...

    Jul 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My First Ever Poem (from when I was seven!)

    That is so flippin' cute!

    May 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Facade

    Hi aqua! First of all, a fantastic poem. I Oops. Computer freaked out.

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Lethean Queen

    Thanks, Where. I will definitely try to do a better job on matching up the syllables next time. By the way, if you ever need a review, just let me ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Lethean Queen

    Thanks Cailey. As far as using the word liquecent, I was writing it for a poetry contest on the site and that was one of the words I had to ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Lethean Queen

    Thanks for reviewing Dogs! I did mean to have 'you' as the lethean queen, but I guess I wasn't that clear on that and wasn't very consistent with the the ...

    Feb 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General Re: Beauty is a Beast, Beast a Beauty

    Thanks!

    Feb 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: What Is Love?

    Thanks, Hannah! I certianly will if I need any help.

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: What Is Love?

    Thanks, Steph!

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: What Is Love?

    Thanks for the advice, Niteowl!

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: What Is Love?

    Thanks, Magpie. It helped a lot!

    Feb 4, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Culture Re: I Dreamed A Dream in Class

    I know, right?

    Feb 3, 2013


Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca