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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: A Crazy Day in the Life of Jake Wells

    That was actually more fun than I expected it to be. The Obama convention made me smile a lot, imagine running through hordes of Obamas! Good job, with your coordination, ...

    May 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: The Lovebirds

    Hello there 1morestupidlovesong! This is PebbleToad on a piece I couldn't help but review! I am a large Hitchcock fan myself and I have to say I LOVED this and ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Bucket of Paint

    Hello, This is Toady here for a review on this wonderful day! I really, really liked this piece. It makes excellent use of analogy, but still keeps the message easy ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Satire Re: the milkman

    This was a pretty cool poem. I know some people like this, that just sit and wait to do things for some weird and abysmal reason as things fall apart ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Fowl Meets Potter (Chapter 1)

    CONTINUE IT!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is very well-written, and excellently crafted. It's just like Artemis to notice something like this, and immediately attempt to exploit it. Your style is a

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Behind A Mask Of Lies

    Happy Review day! I am here to review this AMAZING piece and oust it from the Green Room! Firtst of all, EEEEPPPPIIIICCCC job! This is an exemplary example of the ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cliches and Kisses

    This was an intriguing poem with a lot of potential. It uses analogy and metaphor liberally and relatively well, but a bit ambiguously. I really could not make sense of ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: "Love", an Excerpt from "The Blitman Anthology"

    That was really, really cool. Live long and prosper to you too. I have never seen anyone go that crazy deep with that subject. This was very well done, and ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Long Night

    This is a beautiful poem that uses anologies beautifully, and helps you create a serene picture in your head, while still dreading Nature's iron fist. It is, in my opinion, ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Home

    This was awesome. A very realistic and graphic lyrical poem about memories, and how they can dissipate in time with love and warmth. It seems a lot like the effects ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Way to Nowhere

    Hello, Toady here for a review on this wonderful day! This was an imaginative story, and very fun to read. A very cool description of the future, and you string ...

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Legacy

    Hello, it is Toady here for a review on an amazingly AWESOME piece! Dude, you are about to get really, really rich. This was an amazingly crafted and rhymed poem ...

    Jan 29, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Secrets

    WHOA. You are getting a follower for this. I love the tone-setting word choice in this piece and the whole story being told in a single moment. You do a ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Forest Flounderer

    Hi, Toady here to review an awesome piece! Wow. The ending was not expected at all. That pig is smart as heck. I was honestly expecting for the pig to ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: The Spasmodic Rodent

    THis was REALLY hard. I have narrowed it down to a hedgehog, an armadillo, or Batman.(kidding) It's a cool thing to write, guessing riddles. Only one nitpick: "Is his fat ...

    Jan 1, 2015


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