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Re: A Crazy Day in the Life of Jake Wells
That was actually more fun than I expected it to be. The Obama convention made me smile a lot, imagine running through hordes of Obamas! Good job, with your coordination, ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: The Lovebirds
Hello there 1morestupidlovesong! This is PebbleToad on a piece I couldn't help but review! I am a large Hitchcock fan myself and I have to say I LOVED this and ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: A Bucket of Paint
Hello, This is Toady here for a review on this wonderful day! I really, really liked this piece. It makes excellent use of analogy, but still keeps the message easy ...
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: the milkman
This was a pretty cool poem. I know some people like this, that just sit and wait to do things for some weird and abysmal reason as things fall apart ...
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: Fowl Meets Potter (Chapter 1)
CONTINUE IT!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is very well-written, and excellently crafted. It's just like Artemis to notice something like this, and immediately attempt to exploit it. Your style is a
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: Behind A Mask Of Lies
Happy Review day! I am here to review this AMAZING piece and oust it from the Green Room! Firtst of all, EEEEPPPPIIIICCCC job! This is an exemplary example of the ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Cliches and Kisses
This was an intriguing poem with a lot of potential. It uses analogy and metaphor liberally and relatively well, but a bit ambiguously. I really could not make sense of ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: "Love", an Excerpt from "The Blitman Anthology"
That was really, really cool. Live long and prosper to you too. I have never seen anyone go that crazy deep with that subject. This was very well done, and ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: The Long Night
This is a beautiful poem that uses anologies beautifully, and helps you create a serene picture in your head, while still dreading Nature's iron fist. It is, in my opinion, ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Home
This was awesome. A very realistic and graphic lyrical poem about memories, and how they can dissipate in time with love and warmth. It seems a lot like the effects ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: The Way to Nowhere
Hello, Toady here for a review on this wonderful day! This was an imaginative story, and very fun to read. A very cool description of the future, and you string ...
Jan 31, 2015 -
Re: Legacy
Hello, it is Toady here for a review on an amazingly AWESOME piece! Dude, you are about to get really, really rich. This was an amazingly crafted and rhymed poem ...
Jan 29, 2015 -
Re: Secrets
WHOA. You are getting a follower for this. I love the tone-setting word choice in this piece and the whole story being told in a single moment. You do a ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: Forest Flounderer
Hi, Toady here to review an awesome piece! Wow. The ending was not expected at all. That pig is smart as heck. I was honestly expecting for the pig to ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: The Spasmodic Rodent
THis was REALLY hard. I have narrowed it down to a hedgehog, an armadillo, or Batman.(kidding) It's a cool thing to write, guessing riddles. Only one nitpick: "Is his fat ...
Jan 1, 2015
