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Re: Swan Drive
Wow. This is so beautifully written, but yet so sad! I'm not normally interested in stuff like this, but you wrote it so well! The thing I want more of ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: For the Love of a Life
Wow. You threw a major curveball there. When I started reading this, I thought that it was gonna be a teen romance. But then. Wow. GREAT JOB! I loved how ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Twenty
PeanutPhoebe, here for a review! Hey, this was great! Loved the realisticness (if that's a word, lol:) of this. I also come from a foodie family, but I've honestly always ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Life Goes On
Hey, PeanutPhoebe for a review! Really like this a lot. I LOVE your amazing descriptions. It was awesome. I also like how you were able to keep the sentence "Life ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: Nothing.
PeanutPhoebe, here to review. So, honestly, this really went with your name, it kinda is pretty strange. First of all, this is very confusing. Throughout most of it I had ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: The Peculiar Romances of Edmund Sullivan
Hey, so I read your other work as well, which was pretty amazing:) Obviously, since I had read the other one, I knew what Edmund was. I've got to admit, ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: What have I done?
Hmm... PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review! So I like this idea; you have a lot mystery and suspense. I also like how you draw us in with the ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Windows
PeanutPhoebe, here to review! So, this is very interesting. It had some nice twists in it. I love how you didn't focus a lot on how the characters looked, but ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: My Rose
Hmm... Very cool! I like how you put a past experience into a poem. I don't know specific circumstances of this or anything, but it seems that you were not ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Her Name Was Jessica
PeanutPhoebe, here to review! This story was TOO CUTE! Loved your use of words. I also like how you broke up dialogue into sentences. Your descriptions were great! Simple, yet ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: The Curious Romances of Edmund Sullivan
Wow! This was amazing! It took me a moment at the end to realize that Jenna was dead and Edmund was the doctor. After I figured that out, I loved ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: What Happens in the Evening
Hmm... this is pretty interesting. A little bit depressing, especially since I saw something just today about an assault on a college girl, but interesting besides. I like the way ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: The Wanted Chocolate Bar - In the Extreme
PeanutPhoebe, would you like a review? Wow, you guys did great. And you're right, it makes no sense at all;) But I do agree with Silverlock, this flows amazingly for ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Melting Diamonds
PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! Wow. I absolutely LOVED the details and descriptions of this story. The end seems a little too unrealistic to me tho. I mean, ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Generation
Amen!! This really goes well with an essay I wrote recently. I totally agree with all of that. We are the next generation, we can truly change the future. God ...
Nov 20, 2013
