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PeanutPhoebe

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Swan Drive

    Wow. This is so beautifully written, but yet so sad! I'm not normally interested in stuff like this, but you wrote it so well! The thing I want more of ...

    Feb 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: For the Love of a Life

    Wow. You threw a major curveball there. When I started reading this, I thought that it was gonna be a teen romance. But then. Wow. GREAT JOB! I loved how ...

    Feb 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Twenty

    PeanutPhoebe, here for a review! Hey, this was great! Loved the realisticness (if that's a word, lol:) of this. I also come from a foodie family, but I've honestly always ...

    Feb 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Life Goes On

    Hey, PeanutPhoebe for a review! Really like this a lot. I LOVE your amazing descriptions. It was awesome. I also like how you were able to keep the sentence "Life ...

    Feb 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Nothing.

    PeanutPhoebe, here to review. So, honestly, this really went with your name, it kinda is pretty strange. First of all, this is very confusing. Throughout most of it I had ...

    Feb 9, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Peculiar Romances of Edmund Sullivan

    Hey, so I read your other work as well, which was pretty amazing:) Obviously, since I had read the other one, I knew what Edmund was. I've got to admit, ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: What have I done?

    Hmm... PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review! So I like this idea; you have a lot mystery and suspense. I also like how you draw us in with the ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Windows

    PeanutPhoebe, here to review! So, this is very interesting. It had some nice twists in it. I love how you didn't focus a lot on how the characters looked, but ...

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: My Rose

    Hmm... Very cool! I like how you put a past experience into a poem. I don't know specific circumstances of this or anything, but it seems that you were not ...

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Her Name Was Jessica

    PeanutPhoebe, here to review! This story was TOO CUTE! Loved your use of words. I also like how you broke up dialogue into sentences. Your descriptions were great! Simple, yet ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Curious Romances of Edmund Sullivan

    Wow! This was amazing! It took me a moment at the end to realize that Jenna was dead and Edmund was the doctor. After I figured that out, I loved ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: What Happens in the Evening

    Hmm... this is pretty interesting. A little bit depressing, especially since I saw something just today about an assault on a college girl, but interesting besides. I like the way ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: The Wanted Chocolate Bar - In the Extreme

    PeanutPhoebe, would you like a review? Wow, you guys did great. And you're right, it makes no sense at all;) But I do agree with Silverlock, this flows amazingly for ...

    Dec 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Melting Diamonds

    PeanutPhoebe, here to give you a review!! Wow. I absolutely LOVED the details and descriptions of this story. The end seems a little too unrealistic to me tho. I mean, ...

    Dec 2, 2013
  • Other » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Generation

    Amen!! This really goes well with an essay I wrote recently. I totally agree with all of that. We are the next generation, we can truly change the future. God ...

    Nov 20, 2013


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