PeanutPhoebe

Hi! Here to review on behalf of READ ALL OVER. So, I don't really review poetry, so forgive me if this is bad:/ Ok, first off, I love your idea. ...

Hey! Here to review your work, just like you did some of mine. So, the first thing I have to say is that there are multiple grammar errors. I'm sorry, ...

Ugh, you and your leaving everyone hanging... I like it though, as a writer, that's good. It just frustrates us readers:) So, the beginning of this chapter seemed to be ...

Hey! PeanutPhoebe, here to review! So, first off, there were some grammar errors, but I won't go through them, since everyone else has. I really liked your short story. It ...

Hmm...I love this! I like when I'm able to be the first reviewer, and not just because of the extra points!:) So, one of the things I like about this ...

Wow. You almost just made me cry. Such a beautiful story! I absolutely love dogs. My mom had one who was killed trying to protect her. There was a mean ...

Ooh!! I'm the first review! So, I love this chapter a lot too. You seem to make us love each chapter more than the last! So, Zeke's character is a ...

Wow, I didn't even realize you had another chapter out! I would have been doing this way sooner if I knew. First off, great job! I absolutely love how you're ...

You're finally writing fast enough to satisfy me! LOL. So, I'm not really gonna say much about the typos and stuff, since @Wolfie36 already covered all that. I can't believe ...

Wow! This one was just as interesting as the last. I love that you put more of Miles and his character and personality in there. Also, it's pretty cool that ...

Hey Messenger! So at least this time I'm not TOO late in reviewing right? :) wow, it seems like its been forever since you've posted some. I meant to review ...

Hey!! Sorry I took so long to get here, but well, you know, life happened:( I absolutely LOVE this chapter. You've informed us of so much! I really like the ...

Sorry I didn't get to this. It's great! I like your new character, and the way you introduced his name was creative. I wonder if Susie is an important character? ...

Wow. Great job with leaving us hanging! I totally want to know what happens. Sorry for just now getting to this, I totally forgot to review it after I read ...

Aww, man, the end of the chapters you've posted:(. So, I'm still piecing together more of the plot. I really didn't see any major grammar mistakes. I mean, in this ...