PeanutPhoebe

Hey!! And welcome to YWS:) So TheMessenger and whitewolfpuppy seem to have all the technical details, so I won't go over that. Overall, this is a very interesting poem, and ...

Hey!! Peanutphoebe here to review!! Okay, so I assume this was written rather quickly, since there are more grammatical mistakes than usual. Most of them are things like skipping an ...

Hey!! Knight Celestia here to review. Ok, so some of the first things I noticed was some typos that ran words together. Also, this doesn't really seem to have a ...

Great job on this! Excited to see where it's going and what their "mission" is. I think you did really good describing everything to where you could almost see it. ...

Okay, PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! I've got to say, this is very well written. You describe things well, and the little dialogue that is in there flows well. You did ...

redoing this cuz it didn't count last time... PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! interesting!! i don't see how the moon goes with it. You split up the stanzas nicely, and have ...

This. Is. Awesome. I love this!! It's hard to do a poem without complete sentences, but you rocked it!! I love the way you did the ending last, and then ...

I think you already know what I'm gonna say, but I'm gonna say it anyway. PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! This one is one of my faves out of yours. The ...

Once again, PeanutPhoebe, here to revew... This is a really great poem. I love it. It's cool how it tells the story of a couple. (about when they meet, anyway) ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review again!! This is really cool. I love the way you describe things well without being super wordy. It is a tiny bit confusing about what is ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! You are really good!! I've been going through your poems, and you're amazing!! I love the short sweetness of this one. Also the emphasis on glass ...

putting my last comment on cuz it didn't count as a review...and i want the points, and so does my team:) "PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! Very good job on this ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! Very good job on this one, although it is just a little bit depressing. This could use a little more descriptions, rather than just stating the ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! Great job on this short poem. I really like short poems if they're written well. You did well with your choice of words. This is a ...

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! Love this!! I like the way this told a story about the girl and her life. It shows how through all that, we can find where ...