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Re: Equlibrium
Equilibrium Swaying , swaying as I write and as I write I bleed. I bleed all over my page and as I bleed it soaks. It soaks and my words ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Tale of a suicide
In a lonely room she cries Waiting patiently for the pain to ease, eagerly expecting for her tears to dry, and finally finding a way out of the darkness. IS ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Forgotten
Am I just being missed? Are people just not noticing me? Is there a place that I have to go, To be seen, To be heard, Is there a place ...
Nov 29, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
She stands here and waits on the sidewalk of Forth, Wanting so badly her home and its warmth. He's coming, he's coming, she thinks to herself, And yet she is ...
Oct 25, 2008 -
Re: Two.
Make me choose? I don't think I can. Because neither of you would understand. I don't think I'll ever know what was right to do. But I know that I ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Angry.
I kick stones as I walk, I choke when I talk, If it didn't hurt ,would punch the wall. I yell out obscenities, I tell you, 'am full of angst, ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: Do You Mind?
I honestly don't know how to respond to that...I mean how am I supposed to respond to that. That poem is...it's just what it is... the truth? A smack in ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Untitled
That was so awesome! You know how to write. I mean WOW doesn't even cover it. There are alot of things that I can agree on and I'd like to ...
Oct 14, 2008 -
Re: mania
I like it! You did good. Man if I could express craziness like that then we wouldn't need psychologist poking and probing into situations that they don't belong in. And ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Love Story
I wish I could be the girl taht fell head over hills with someone and ended up being with them no matter how bad teh Monsters of the Adult Realm ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: I'm here
i think people like you who can actually say that you are here are the best people on the planet. I mean it too. because when i was in a ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: karma
I have karma but at the same time, I also have really good luck. It's partly in response to what I do, but it's also in a part to how ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Roses Without Thorns Prologue and Chapter 1
The prologue is really good. And so is the story. But the story is alittle dry in my opinion. Spice it up! Add a problem to it. More energy. I'm ...
Oct 8, 2008
