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Re: Search for the Ruby of Fire Chapter 37
Hello, there! I'm Pen, and I think it's quite obvious that I'm here to review your post. Lol! ••••••♪••••••♪•••••♪ "The bright morning sun bounced off the clear
Mar 7, 2016 -
Re: To Play at War
Hello, there! I'm Pen and here is what I think: The piece you put up here is very nice. There are no spelling or structure mistakes that I could find, ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: Freedom Storm(Prologue-chapter one)
Hello there. I'm Pen, and I'll review this piece. Hope to be helpful!! •••••••♪••••••••♪•••••••♪•••••••••••• "It was during th
Mar 5, 2016 -
Re: Ridge Life For Others. Part One
Hello there. I'm Pen and I will review your story. Hope to be helpful!! ••••••♪•••••••♪••••••♪ "Liliana walked the school halls wondering what she was doing
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 24: Road Changes
Hello there. I'm Pen and I'll review this piece, hoping to be helpful!! •••••••♪•••••••••••••••♪♪•••••••••••♪ “LIIIIINNNNKKK
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: From Bad to Worse
It all started when Ma Fu Da was with his parents and saw a another boy but then he realised he was a peasant he realised he was not like ...
Mar 1, 2016