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Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 5 *
Hey, tigeraye! Here as requested to review this chapter for you! :) The Review! Plot The plot of this chapter was really good, so it's hard to critique it. I ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 9
Hey! I'm here for a requested review, obviously. :) I've read through the before chapters, and have brief thoughts on them below. I'll try and focus on this chapter though, ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 8): That One Pigeon Again
Hey! So I saw chapter 9 in the Green Room, and was going to review it after reading the before chapters, but then saw the bold message of "do not ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Disputatores- Chapter 2
Hey! Um. I can't think of an opening sentence so... The Review! Plot This whole premise is extremely interesting. You've took the lame old "sixth sense" , and completely turned ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Before Beauty-chapter #2
Hey! I'm here for a review, as I've made myself a mission of reviewing older works that are still in the Green Room. :) The Review! Plot I've always loved ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Geniturams- Part Three
Hey! Ok, this will probably also be a shorter review. :) The Review! Plot I'll be honest, I didn't really like this chapter all that much. It just seemed a ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Geniturams P2
Hey! Here to review part 2! This may be a shorter review... The Review! Plot There's that letter I was looking for!!! Ok, now I understand what's going on A ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Geniturams
Hey! I saw that the 3rd part of this is in the Green Room, so I decided to read the parts before and drop a couple reviews. :) The Review! ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: All Secrets Untold - Chapter Three (Part One)
Hey, ScarlettFire! I've made a personal mission of mine to review older works in the Green Room, and well this work happened to be one! I read the other two ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Stone Cold Hands - Chapter 2
Hey! So I saw this in the Green Room, and the title intrigued me. So, I read the prologue and first chapter, then of course this chapter, and decided to ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: I miss you
Hey, basia77201! Oh my, this quite heartfelt and moving. The Review! Plot Ok, this doesn't really have a "plot" but more of "content", but I used Plot as a header ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Rejection Sequence
Hey, Mazuurek! Holy Flipping Fluffernutter. O.O That was intense. The Review! Plot This honestly sounds exactly like the beginning of a book. I loved Every.Single.Second. I loved how the first ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Return of Magic Part One Capter Four:A Street Performance Goes Horribly Wrong pt. Two
Hey, TheFantasy14! The Review! Plot The plot of this was very well done, and I enjoyed this second half! I was just a bit curious as to how no one ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Paper Planes (Ch5)
Hey, xJupiter! No, no, no, No!!!!! They can't die out there!!!!!! At least not until they do something else that is sweet. *crosses arms determinedly* These guys will survive. The ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Heartlines
Hey, wridingislife!! Ok. So I haven't read the other reviews, so I may rehash something on accident. I apologize in advance for this, :) The Review! Plot The plot for ...
Sep 17, 2015