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Re: Chapter 4: The Journey Begins
Hey LordZeus! It's Myth here for another review. This one will probably be pretty short, as I don't have much to say. I thought this chapter was pretty good, and ...
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: Hard love, that is if you have magic ;)
Hey Happy! It's me here for a review. :) I'm just going to jump right in, and as you know with me I can unintentionally start sounding rude. A metaphor ...
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Six: Another Assassination Attempt.
Heya, TheFantasy14! Myth here for another review, as you can probably tell. It was kinda funny reading this, considering I just wrote a scene in Magic Awaits You were Jim/Twitch ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: The Return of Magic: Part One Chapter Five: A new threat
Heya, TheFantasy14! Myth here for a review, as you can probably tell. Ok. So, overall I liked this chapter. There's just a few things I'd like to point out. Plot ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: The Cursed, Pt. 6
Heya Comrie! I saw this in the Green Room, and after reading through the rest of the story I decided to read and review this chapter as well! I'm sorry ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: A Modern Day Knight Chapter 5.
Hey, Dragongirl! After reading through the other chapters, I'm here to review this one! The Review! Plot This is a pretty interesting concept. A wizard, and dragon, and a seemingly ...
Oct 4, 2015 -
Re: Forgotten Fire, Chapter 5 - Bite
Heya Sagitta! After reading the before chapters, I'm here to review this one! I apologize if this review isn't very helpful, as it was hard to really find anything to ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: pretend reality
Hey, MollyWatkins! I hope your day has been good so far! It's Myth here for a review on this awesome day! I just wish there wasn't all the warnings about ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: The Unsinkable Disaster-Chapter 4
Heya Firelight! After reading the previous chapters and prologue, I'm here to review this chapter! The Review! Plot While Historical Fiction isn't usually my cup of tea, this is seems ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: Kevin and Shoko - Chapter 3
Heya, xJupiter! This review is probably going to be pretty short, because I don't have much to say. While this chapter wasn't my favorite, it was still pretty great! I ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: Chalice of Life: Chapter 10 (Part 1)
Heya! I'm here for a review! This chapter was honestly really good, so I had to get pretty nit-picky to find anything. I don't have any notes on plot or ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: Princess of Alderia: Chapter 1 (Draft 1)
Hey, Griffinkeeper! Wow, it's impressive how many reviews you've done! Well, I saw this in the Green Room and thought I'd check it out! I apologize for any typos as ...
Oct 2, 2015 -
Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter Eleven
Heya LordofLit101! First, I apologize for any typos as I'm writing this at 2 in the morning. I've spent the past couple of days reading through the before chapters, so ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 8 *
Hey, tigeraye! Myth here for another review! Well, lets get started, haha. The Review! Plot Agh, I love the different references to history or movies. They add a pretty cool ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Kevin and Shoko - Chapter 2
Heya, xJupiter! Glad to see you've continued on with this story, :) It's definitely showing amazing potential! The Review! Plot Okay, so I'm probably going to be a bit nit-picky ...
Oct 1, 2015