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Re: Fine.
Hey there Anna! I'm going to give you a quick stanza by stanza review. I'll touch on the form, idea, and voice in each stanza. I hope my review helps! ...
Feb 4, 2013 -
Re: We Are Finite Beings
Hey there Mochi, I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review. I'll touch on form where need be. I'll try to focus on idea and voice though, since ...
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Re: Deleted 34
Hey Lumi! I'm going to give you a quick stanza by stanza review. I'll pretty much just break down my reaction to each stanza, on a technical and emotional level. ...
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Re: Deleted.
Hey there Jon! I'm going to give you a quick review. This also happens to be my one hundredth review. *throws confetti* That aside, I'm going to do a stanza ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: In This Time Of Eliminating Prologue/chapter 1-3
Hey there Lylas! I'm going to give you a quick chapter by chapter review. I'll give you my thoughts on the idea, voice, and characterization in each chapter. I won't ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Pillboxed 5 (16+)
Hey Hannah! I'm kind of jumping in right in the middle here, so my review won't touch much on characterization, or the actual story. Instead I'll focus on sentence fluency ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Unto the Darkness part I
Hey there Finick! I'm going to give you a quick review. I'm going to start the review with some technical issues in the story, like sentence structure, word order, and ...
Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: What do the dead leave? Second Draft
Hey there, CM! I'm going to do a quick review. I'll start with some technical things that stood out to me. Next I'll touch on characterization. I'll especially touch on ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: I Loved You
Hey there An! I'm going to give you a quick stanza by stanza review. I hope my review is helpful, if you have any questions about something I bring up ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: In Memory
Hey Hannah! I'm going to give you a quick review. My review will focus on sentence fluency, and the sense of setting. I really enjoyed this piece, and I hope ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: A worthy dweller
Hey there Youssefayman! I'm going to give you a quick review. I'll start by talking about word tense. Then I'll move into sentence and paragraph fluency. Last, I'll go into ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: Bi-monthly Dinner talk
Hey there Pletta! I'm going to give you a quick stanza by stanza review. After that I'll summarize my feelings about the poem. I hope my review is helpful! She ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: Remember Me
Hey there Starlleene! I'm going to give you a quick review. I'll start with some technical stuff. Then I'll talk about idea and voice. Anyway, time to get on with ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: The Beginning
Hey DarkPandemonium! I'm going to give you a quick review. I won't get into grammar, instead I'll focus on dialog, voice, and idea. At first it through me for a ...
Jan 27, 2013 -
Re: In The New Year
Hey Ingrid! I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review, but I'll start with an overview. I hope it helps you out. Now, let's get cracking! I liked ...
Jan 27, 2013
