Panikos

Hi, Revialle! Pan here to boil up a quick review. I love the idea of this piece. The opening drew me in completely, and I like the set up you ...

Hi, eloquentailurophile! Pan here to fry up a review for you. I'm not normally a poetry reviewer, but I thought I'd break out of that and take a look at ...

Hi, Mage! I'm Pan, here to fry up a review for you today. I love the opening! It seems so incongruous to read the words: 'the chosen one was on ...

Hi, Nieeblur! I'm Pan, and I will be stirring up a quick review for you today. Intriguing story! I quite like how pared back it is - you never dump ...

Hi, HavYouCeenMyGum! I'm Pan, here to fry up a review for you today. There's a great idea in here, and I like the sense of ambiguity and horror you have ...

Hi, Remembrance! Pan is here to cook up a review. An exciting start! I'm definitely intrigued by the premise, and with a bit of fine-tuning this will be a solid ...

Wotcha, Oreos. Pan here to fry up a review. Nice start! I'm a sucker for dodgy facilities and strange experiments in fiction, especially when the forces behind them are malevolent. ...

Hi, DivergentDemigod. Back to fry up another review. The drama continues! You did well to build up the tension of them getting closer and closer to the body, and I ...

Hi, featherstone9086! I'm Pan, and I will be boiling up a quick review today. First off, I didn't see any grammatical errors, which is always a big plus. Your sentences ...

Hi, DivergentDemigod. I'm Pan, and I'll be cooking up a review for you today. This is a prologue that hints at an interesting story beyond, but that's precisely why I'm ...

Hi, Tootsie. Hope you're settling in well at YWS. I'm Pan, and I'll be frying up a review for you today. Well, you certainly know how to write an action-packed ...

Hi, EternalRain! I'm back again! Nice to get a little more backstory on Luana, as well as some more in-depth info on the actual process of practising magic. I think ...

Hi, Eternal Rain! Back again to review your third chapter. Your characterisation is still going strong, and, as I mentioned in an earlier review, it's nice to see you taking ...

Hi, Chaoticpiece. I'm Pan, and I'll be reviewing your work today. Very, very interesting premise. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this - not on YWS, at ...

Hi, EternalRain. Back again to cook up a review for your second chapter! I'd say that this chapter is definitely better than your first. I seem to remember telling you ...