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I think this is really good. The thought behind it is one I find very interesting as I can never seem to keep my mouth shut. On the actual poem ...

I think it was great. I like the theme and the repeating line Only at the apocalypse. The idea is great but when you get to the line about the ...

Oh I loved this! The concept was new and fresh. Our narrator (lets call her Nelly) so Nelly to me seemed very real and deep. If she were a character ...

First of all this was interesting. the first completely caught my attention. I think the idea is great and I would love to see it expanded but of course I ...

Well this is very interesting and has lots of potential. I love the theme 'Look out of the Window' but it got a bit repetitive. I suggest breaking it into ...

First off I want to tell you what I thought good about this. I loved it. The concept was amazing and the characters developed beautifully. My favorite lie was, "In ...

I enjoyed this so much. The concept was pure genius, and had me hanging on every word. There was a bit of humor which made this even better. I love ...

This threw me off a little. At the beginning you seemed pretty friendly with whoever you were talking to but at the end it switched almost to hate. I think ...

I saw a couple of grammatical errors but I like to review more on the story itself. It was amazing. I love the characters and the story, even though I ...

I really think this was quite good. I thought it needed more of a story, some history, or to be longer, that was only because I wanted to read more ...

At first I thought this needed more backgroung and history. Then i read it again. I really think it works this way, and I enjoyed that it wasn't basically porn ...

I really liked this, especially the ending. It was great. The countdown from five had my heart racing and when he said one it was like being thrown off a ...

I love lay on a blanket and watch fireworks, or I did. You have changed my mind. This is very real. People have changed over the years but there will ...

Ok. I lved the first chapter and I still do, but reading over it I found one thing. It goes for both chapters. Description. You need more of it. Lengthen ...

Okay. I like the twist you put in with not being all romantic on us. I'll always be the biggest cheesiest romantic you'll meet but I think the whole world ...