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Re: A World Without Suffrage
Hello, first can I just say wow. This is a pretty interesting concept induced so well with so little words. The thought of roller coasting back down to before women's ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: What I'm Thankful For
( Bear with me here; on a mobile device.) Hey! Waffle here for a review. Your simple recognition of the beauty that we've been blessed with as humans on this ...
Mar 29, 2016 -
Re: Every object tells a story!
Hello! Waffle here for a quick review :) First of all, welcome to YWS!!! If you ever need help, there are a whole ton of people who will be more ...
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Never Hers
Hello! Waffle here to review your poetry :) Nothing better then a fresh new member willing to show off some skills! The ultimate flow of the poem (the consistency,) is ...
Mar 14, 2016 - Re: The Pilgrim- Chapter One Mar 13, 2016
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Re: The Day I Caught the Sun
Hello! Waffle here for a quick review :) This is a version of poetry I feel like this site doesn't encase very often. It's not really descriptive, but the story ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Angels: Part One
Hey! O U T S T A N D I N G work! Seriously, I'm not just saying it! There were a couple of times where I think you may ...
Feb 26, 2016 -
Re: Sunshine
Hey girl! What an amazing story! Great story, good idea. I am really mad at the whole no capitalizing thing though! Take the time to go back in and capitalize. ...
Feb 26, 2016 -
Re: Goodnight my Beloved
This is so sweet, I love it! Everything here is good, the grammar, the line placement, and the sentiment in the poem. However, I feel the part "If I were ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: The Leaving Man
Hello Hatt! Waffle here on a very old laptop to write a review, sorry if some words don't turn out (because of the laptop). This was an enjoyable poem, you ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: The lonely one
Hey SilverBerry! I can really relate to this poem, that feeling of loneliness, that you'll never fit in with the rest but you want to speak to someone. Very well ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: The Girl Who Watched And Waited
Hey girl! This poem says a lot, and I feel it should be voiced. Since a young age we have heard "Be you" "You're unique" "Don't worry about what others ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Waffle's Old Stories
Oh man, I remember when I read some of these for you and I was all like "OH MY GOODNESS IT'S SO BOOTIFUL!!!!!" I just can't help but laugh at ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: Black Heart
Bonjour, autre écrivain ! I loved the concept! That death is a person is not new to me, but that death had a life once upon a time? Very, very ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: To write a short story
Love it!
Jan 21, 2016