Paige

Hello there, I'm Paige! I was initially drawn to this work because of the creative tagline, especially how you noted that Derick Marr is a villain. That’s an extremely intriguing ...

Hello there, I'm Paige, and it's my honor to congratulate you on this great piece! The flow of your story is extremely pleasant, and there are few to zero grammatical ...

Hello, dearest Cutie. You may or may not recall, but I am meticulous about grammar, and that will likely consume the majority of this review. In the third paragraph or ...

Hi there! Congratulations on this story! I can see it blossoming quite creatively! Nice job! I love the different themes of the story; jealousy, betrayal, guilt, greed (in the way ...

I really enjoyed reading this! I agree with Noelle, when she mentioned that the first two sentences seem slightly out of place. Maybe, instead of being specific about what Katarine ...

Hey there, Noelle! I'm starting this review before I've read the whole piece, just so you know. I wanted to point out little things that you could fix as I ...

First, and foremost, GREAT piece! While it was very sad, it was equally as beautiful. My favorite line of the story is this metaphor: "I am a shattered pane of ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece, Wherethewindgoes! I like the way you described physical feelings and observations, and also included descriptions of things without the poem consisting of mainly d

Hey there! Great story. Like the previous reviewer, I was captivated by the progression of the story! All I could feel was pain for the protagonist. This may sound sadistic, ...

This is truly, very good! I love writing poems/lyrics myself, and this is definitely a poem/lyrical to be proud of. I like how you stayed with the theme of the ...

Wow. This is really amazing. I have one slight problem... I don't know how to review it. I'm much better at reviewing stories... What's really foreign to me, is you ...

Hi! I love, love, love this poem! I like the way you entwined feelings and actions without having one dominate the other. Does that make sense? There is only one ...

WELCOME TO YOUNG WRITERS SOCIETY! I really like the idea of your story! The apocalypse theme is a very popular idea, but I really admire where you're going with the ...

I really enjoyed this story! I'm a huge fan of the way that you entwined the mystery, suspense and romance all in one. I like the sort-of-cliffhanger at the end! ...

This was definitely something to be categorized as "Other." It isn't bad; on the contrary, it's actually really good. The problem for me is that I am so easy to ...