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Punctuation, Spelling, and Grammar Well after reading this I get the impression it may be a good idea for you to review your basic punctuation and spelling. It's always a ...

You can't blame your lack of understanding on my ability to write. Haha, which is quite sad when you think about it. Go read more, go watch more movies, go ...

First Impressions First hint, and it's one you'll hear a lot around these parts, show, don't tell. This entire first part is all tell and no show at all. It's ...

Love and hate. Cupid and fate. To laugh. To lie. To learn how to fly! After the first stanza I can tell that your word choice is based off of ...

Because the French title has no tie in to the content of the poem, it appeared to be a typo. If there is an actual reason for having the title ...

First Impressions Slow down ^.^ right now you have a lot of stuff going on, which is good and bad. Take it one step at a time, and relax your ...

Capitalization and Punctuation ...or in this case, the lack there of. Capitalize your "I's"... this is a must. As for the rest of the punctuation, my answer is just fix ...

I am certain you are going to hear this often around this site, the words "show don't tell". In this case, they certainly ring true. Not to mention the constant ...

Edward Cullen You sit with me at night Hold me safe inside your arms Hmm, I question your need to start the poem with his name, it seems a touch ...

The first thing you need to learn here, is that sex can be vivid without being raunchy. You're wording has issues, instead of making your readers feel passionate, it's making ...

i didnt ask YOU what you thought.and i am not being rude thank you very much.if you think thats rude than you havnt seen nothing.instead of just going on about ...

First Impressions: In truth I see where you were trying to go with this, however right now you aren't bringing us in enough to really make the message stick. You ...

First Impressions: The first thing that came to mind after reading this was "meh". It's an old idea done in an old way with a flat tone and as a ...

I think blue mountain is supposed to be capitalized. And I don't think a mountain can loom near. :lol: 'course it can. That line made perfect sense to me, actually. ...

I trusted you You broke my heart. I should’ve known you’d do this to me. I should’ve seen it coming. I did see this coming. But I shoved it aside. ...