OverEasy

The first problem that I see with this is the formatting. It makes it nearly impossible to read it, especially in the dialogue sections. Dialogue is never supposed to be ...

Hey, I haven't reviewed in a while, but you asked so here goes. The main thing that is missing here is voice, and flow. Right now, you have words and ...

Hi! I am OverEasy and I will be your reviewer today. The first thing that I noticed was that "Goddess" is spelled incorrectly in your title. I am Lori May. ...

Hi there! I am OverEasy and I will be your reviewer for today. I am the forest and you are the trees. Now you are gone and I am empty. ...

Hi! I am OverEasy and I will be your reviewer today :) I've made a mistake a new one, my latest one, one to add to my millions but this ...

Hi! I'm OverEasy and I will be reviewing you today. Never forget me, Never let go. I’m always behind you, Just so you know. The first thing that is glaringly ...

Hi! I know you're relatively new to this, so I will do my best to take it easy. You can try to break me, Point out all my flaws And ...

Summer term, September 1st 8:00pm I am always a little confused when something like this is added to the top of a story. I don’t think it really serves a ...

Hi! I'm OverEasy, and I'll be your reviewer for today. The sky seems to glitter in a heavenly hue. The world seems much brighter when I'm here with you. So, ...

It's been a while, but I need to get back into the reviewing game, so here goes. First Impressions: The language here lacks a certain level of poetry, you're asking ...

So it's been a while since I have reviewed, and I hope I am not too rusty. Shaking, thoughts racing teeth clenched voices raising. (anger) First thing that jumps to ...

Hey Twiggers, The first thing I notice about this is that your punctuation is off. Ending each like with a comma does not make a poem grammatically correct. In fact, ...

I am deeply confused by the formatting of this. Why are there bits in quotes and why on earth is it blue? I might read it by the format is ...

I First Impressions The first thing I can thing after reading this is that you must slow down. There is so much happening in such a short space that it's ...

Hey TanazMasaba, Forgive me, as this is my first review that I have given in quite a while, and I might be a bit rusty. Onto the Poem! The main ...