Otterpop

Hey there! Otterpop here with a review! Sorry you may not have heard from me lately; my sis and I are prepping for a long vacation so I've been busy ...

Hey there! Otterpop here with a review! This first chapter here was a very interesting one, I do find interest in stories that push you straight into the action without ...

Hey there! Noticed this has been in the Green Room a while, so I'm here with a review for ya! The first thing I noticed is the first-person POV; it's ...

Hey there! Otterpop here with a quick review! As often as you tend to review my works, I noticed this has been sitting in the Green Room for a while ...

Hey there! Otterpop here with a quick review! The first thing that caught my eye was the almost memoir-journal-like feel this intro is giving me. As a writer myself who ...

Hey there! Otterpop here with a quick review! Figured I'd get this out of the Green Room, especially since it's been there so long! Now I am not familiar with ...

Hey there! Otterpop here with a quick review! Let's get this out of the green room, shall we?? Even if there's a lot I have not read of this, I ...

Heya! Otterpop here with a quick review! So the major thing I noticed was that you've done a lot of the groundwork for creating a very fascinating world! The main ...

Heya! Otterpop here with a quick review! For one thing I did not expect to get so much detail in a single, SHORT short story. That's what is very nice ...

Greetings! Otterpop here, with a quick review! Wanted to get this out of the Green Room, and it's been a while since I've read Warrior cats stories! I do apologize ...

Greetings! Otterpop here, with a review! So, one thing that I am VERY partial to in writing is a rule called "show, don't tell". It works especially well in fantasy, ...

Greetings! Otterpop here, with a quick review! One of the first things that I notice is the frequent use of the word 'they', but sometimes it happens so often I ...

Greetings! I present to you another review! And would ya look at that? Another section from you in the Green Room! There was less detail in this compared to the ...

Greetings! I present to you a review! As an individual who writes fantasy also, I enjoy seeing writers produce details, both vivid and otherwise, into their works. You make great ...

I've encountered plenty of prologues to stories where they will be two pages long, or even 10! And this prologue is but a paragraph of information. And I believe that ...