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Thank you guys :) Edited for clarity. If there are weird looking commas to you, I have them there so that I can remember how it is sung. Sorry for ...

Dang didn't even see those haha. I will thank you. :)

You are most welcome :D I will be writing my own little piece on this topic so... feel free to read that today when I get it out :D

I feel ashamed.... I totally thought I went through and corrected it all lol. And thank you for the review :) Been trying to turn a bit towards a novel ...

hahaha no worries. :D I totally did format it that way, but it keeps taking the spaces out haha. I'll just have to edit it with somethin else lol. Thank ...

Oooooooh! Totallymakes more sense now hahahah. Sorry to hear about your friend. Feed him many a steaks. He'll love steak muahahaha.

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

Thank you :) Glad you liked it :)

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Hehehe, thank you love :)

Thank you very much ^-^

Of course. ^-^ I do like the poem, it is only a critique from a readers perspective. Do not think I am judging the writer in any way. ^-^

Thank you, it means a lot ^-^

^-^ I am glad you enjoyed it. ^-^ And I have other works whenever you want to read them as well. ^-^ Thank you so much for the comment ^-^