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Re: Lifeless
Welcome to the Young Writers Society, mon amie! Well if this isn't just the thing I needed to cheer myself up! :) Just kidding, this is your art not mine. ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Rose
Can I tell you that Rose was, still is, and always will be the best companion? With that in mind, I instantly clicked on your poem. "Oh look it's a ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Just Love
Bonjour, Mon amie! How lucky the Oracle has stumbled across your poem this afternoon! You made the claim that this poem is a little rough... but that means nothing, poetry ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Crush the French!
When I read through this poem I felt like it a marching beat! I can hear the drums and the call to war! (so do all the European countries want ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Love Poem No. 7
Well, I'm a sucker for mushy romances like this. (And the Elvis lyrics drew me in almost instantly, nice touch ;) But as all poetry is much more than rhymes ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: how can God be dead if dead birds still breathe.
Welcome to YWS. As a newbie myself i'm here to introduce you to the type of critique that this site is infamous for XD First off, poetry is much more ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: School
Well, my friend what can I say? As a man of simplicity, this poem speaks to me on a supernatural level (and honestly, because yes, because who doesn't revel in ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Elsa (Frozen) & Jack Frost Fanfiction Part 1
Very interesting notion (although we all knew that this would happen anyway :P) This story is very simple and written as such for an idea as whimsical as this. I ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Mother,my goddess
Well Divya, this is my first time to review a poem so I'll give it a shot. O Oh and let me start off by saying that your profile pic ...
May 26, 2015
