OliviaWhoWrites

Damn that is a fantastic line! Is it ok if I use it?

This was divided into stanzas, but for some reason, whenever I submit it the site erases them.

Hello Magpie! I really loved this poem. I thought the imagery was great and I felt that this was a piece that anyone can connect with. I thought it was ...

I thought this was a great poem. The message was very thought provoking and some of the metaphors were superb. My favorite line was the last line, "Why must we ...

I thought this was a great poem. The message was very thought provoking and some of the metaphors were superb. My favorite line was the last line, "Why must we ...

Let me start out by saying that I really liked this poem. I can ell that you put a lot of heart into it. I thought the repitition gave the ...

I really like the concept of this poem and I really like the style it was written in. I really liked the stanza after N, it was definitely my favorite. ...

I really enjoyed this piece. My favorite stanza was definitely the first one and I feel like this poem has a really strong start. I felt like the third stanza ...

This poem was really enjoyable to read! It sounds like it would be the mantra for a non profit charity of some sort. I really liked the repetitive format, it ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! I will definetely take some some of your critiques (like reformatting some of the stanzas and replacing dull words).

Thank you so much for reviewing!!!! I'll definetely take some of your critiques (replacing dull words and reformatting some of the stanzas). I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and thank ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! I will definetely take some of your critiques (like condensing the beginning and re formatting some of the stanzas) and maybe post a revised ...

Awww this poem is so sweet!!! For me, I felt like this poem put a refreshing twist on a cliche romance poem. "the kaleidoscope of butterflies," line was definitely my ...

I really like the concept behind this poem. My favorite lines are the last two lines "She's singing a happy song, But she has the lyrics wrong." I feel like ...

This is a hauntingly lovely poem and the rhythm is wonderful. I could really feel the bitterness and pain in the descriptions. My favorite lines are "Then came the devils ...