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Re: burning beauties
Hello! oliverISorange here to review (meow meow) LiptonCookie has pointed out many of the grammatical errors, so there really isn't any point to nitpick. Personally, I think that you should ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: Out in the Cold
oliverISorange here to review (meow meow) Hello. Man, the lyrics are something that I would listen to, it should be recorded! This piece of work was worth reading, a bit ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: No More Death
Oliverisorange here---Reviewing and Mewing (meow meow) Hello! Let me just start by saying that this was an awesome poem. It was short, and easy to understand. It had a very ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: Lemon Melancholy
oliverISorange here for a review! Hey! This was a very well done poem. I enjoyed the figurative language and the comparison of the box to your skies. It projected a ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: An Account of an Awkward Flower
oliverIsOrange here-- reviewing and mewing (meow meow) The last stanza was my favourite. This was a well thought out poem. I can relate to a lot of it, and I'm ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: Blue Eyes
oliverISorange- reviewing and mewing (meow meow) Hello! First of all, the title of this poem caught my eye. I initially thought it would be a bit more sappy, yet I ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: Anxiety
oliverISorange- reviewing and mewing! This piece of work caught my eye, and I had to read it, mostly because I have been diagnosed with depression and anxiety. I can relate ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Can You Hear Me Cry
OliverISorange- Reviewing and mewing (that's catchy, right?) I'm going to be completely honest, I was hesitant to read this because you didn't capitalize, "I". And man, I need to learn ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Strangers
Hello! This was an excellent piece of work. I would have loved to see you perform it. Even though I can not hear your voice, I feel as though the ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Would you like an apple pie with that?
Hello! Oliverisorange here! This poem was hilarious. It obviously had some dark and sarcastic undertones. It mocks the fast food industry, Jamie Oliver would approve! It was clever and well ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Jon
Wow. This really struck a nerve. You put a creative twist on self harm (not to say that you glamorized it, just added another perspective). The reviews before mine pretty ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: I gave birth to my nightmare
Hello! I loved how the speaker changed after the second verse. I haven't read a poem with so much hatred in quite some time. I liked how you mentioned that ...
Mar 17, 2014
