User avatar

OliveDreams

OliveDreams

  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mrs. Nova

    Hey CatherinKanya! On a mission in the Green Room tonight, so I’m here to review your short story! I will review as I read so it makes a lot more ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Rose/Thorn

    Hi Vivian! Olive here to review your chapter! The title caught my eye so I came to have a peek. I will review as I read so that it will ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: An Author's Dream

    Hey Kazza :) Here to offer my opinions on your chapter this evening! I will review as I read so that it will make a little more sense to both ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Realistic Re: There once was a young girl...

    Hey! Olive here to give you a, I hope, helpful review on your realistic piece here! I will review as I read so that it will make a lot more ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Everyday Duels

    Hey Birkhoff! Here as requested & promised :) I will review as I read so that it will make a lot more sense to both me and you. I will ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Trio (2)

    Hi Nike. I’m just about to review the second chapter of this in the Green Room so I thought I’d better pop to your first chapter first and see what ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: Shut Down

    Hi Deanie! Here to peek at your short story. I love them & I’m more than excited to read yours! I will review as I read so here goes: Love ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages

    Howdy DarkPandemonium! I’m here to review your short story this evening :) I will review as I read so that it will make a lot more sense to both me ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: In the beginning Snippet

    Hey NerdBird! I also adore your username and I’m here to review your novel chapter on this fine evening! I will review as I read so that it makes a ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Health Re: Thermal Expansion (The Burning Man)

    Hey Adam :) It's me.. I really loved this! It's so different to the usual romantic/slushy style of lyrics that I've experienced on here before. I'd be really interested in ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: That's what you get...a bad love !

    Good Evening maroonamorous! Here to review your delightful short story today. Firstly - welcome to YWS! I’m sure you will love it here as much as we all do. Feel ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Willow and the Great Beyond--Chapter One

    Hi cha3739! I’m here to review your lovely looking short story! I will review as I read so that it will make a lot more sense to both me and ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative Re: Young Man's Tale (Chapter 1)

    GOOD EVENING! I am here representing The Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto in this fantabulous review day! Yes, that really is our name! :D YAY! I will review as ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Disappointed Love

    Hi there Nanya! I'm here representing The Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto! Yes that really is our name ;) I am in no way whatsoever a poet so I ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Semper Fi

    Hi there! here to review on behalf of The Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto! Yes, that really is our name. I'm in no terms what so ever a poet ...

    Nov 24, 2013


No one achieves anything alone.
— Leslie Knope