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Well - you can say that I'm most definitely intrigued! I haven't read anything like this on here before! I'm very interested as to why he's ending up blacked out ...

Evening! And happy review day :) I HATE THE FATHER! haha but I think I'm supposed to. I love the mother, and the nurse/maid. I think this prologue sets your ...

Hello there :) Here to review and hopefully help! I am a supernatural/fantasy/science fiction junkie so I'm more than happy to read through your prologue. I will write my review ...

Hello fellow fire flower :) I thought I would return the favour and offer you a review of my own! Overall - I think this is actually a great beginning ...

Well - what an interesting idea! I've not read anything like this on here and I'm intrigued to read more - I hope there is more??? I want to know ...

Hello :) Here to review this piece that caught my eye. Hope I help! Ill review it as I am reading it so you can get my true reactions to ...

Hey Alpha :) I'm here to offer my review and hopefully it helps! I will write this as I read it so you get my real reactions. “The boy, shrugged.” ...

Afternoon :) I'm here to review your prologue as I agree with the other reviewers below me that you would find it much easier to get feedback if you broke ...

Afternoon – Here to help if I can! I'm already hooked with this. And I'm gonna write my review as I go. “The sun was barely emerging and the two ...

Afternoon & happy review day :) I'm here to help if I can! I really enjoyed the beginning of this chapter. You've already hooked me in and got myself asking ...

Afternoon and happy review day! I really liked the idea for this novel. The relationship between the two main characters is interesting. I'm not gonna lie that I became slightly ...

Afternoon :) Happy to help if I can! You're definitely a talented writer - I can see nothing wrong with your sentence structure, punctuation and so on. Now to the ...

Afternoon. :) I really enjoyed this poem and I'm not usually into them. I liked the lines: "The questions have receded and died in my throat/To him, my words, I ...

I really enjoyed this! I know I sound surprised but I've never actually thought to click on something titled 'Dramatic Monologue'. You've opened my eyes to something new! THANKS :) ...

Hello :) I really really like the title of this poem! I spotted it on the right hand of my screen in 'featured works' and immediately clicked. I love that ...