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Re: Mallinda Collins
Hello there my fabulous friend! As you're new literary agent, I thought I would come and give you a little more encouragement and confidence to make this a NOVEL. The ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 3: Ky, First Words
Me again. Here to serve another fantastical review sandwich for team red! Things I liked; I love that you're writing from the dog's point of view. It's a fresh idea ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 2: Cynthia, Coming Out of the Closet
Hello there! I remember writing a review for the first chapter of this novel so I'm excited to be back for more! :D Here to represent the red team on ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Assassin
Hello there! I'm back! I will provide the most scrumptious review sandwich that you have ever seen/gobbled up. First things first, the things I liked; I love your opening line. ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Part One Edited
Hello there Crystal. I know you are no longer participating in the review day proceedings but I see there no reason why you shouldn't receive some first class reviews. I ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Illusion - Prologue
Hello there! Here to represent the red team on this amazing review day! I will provide the most scrumptious review sandwich that you have ever seen/gobbled up. First things first ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Minds are opened only when hearts are opened!
Hello there ACHU! Here to represent the red team on this perfect review day. I will provide a reviewing sandwich for your essay/article. First things first, the things I liked; ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Children of the Forest - Part 1: Prologue
Hello there Liaya! I love your name! I am here representing the red team of this fine review day. I will give you a beautiful review sandwich for your prologue. ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: For Griffypoo
Hi Snoink! Here representing the amazing red team on this fine review day :) I will present a delicious review sandwich for your chapter. First off, the things I liked; ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Does Fear Evoke Love? Or is it the Other Way Round?
Hello there! Here to review your work for this review day! I am here representing team red and at your service. I will do you a delightful review sandwich :) ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The thing about dying.
Good evening! Here to review your short story for this review day. I will be representing the ever present reds :) I will do you a lovely review sandwich. First ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Content- College Essay
CAILEY! Happy Review Day Opposition Blue! Here to take a look over your college essay. Here we go! “The place where I am perfectly content is actually not a place ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Shades: Episode One, Act Four "Super Freaks"
Back! Let's dive straight into it. 1.Oh goody...I like the sisters. 2.A change of clothes!? That's rather generous! 3.WOAH! How is Eddie in the photo?!?! I need to know now! ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Shades: Episode One, Act Three "Super Freaks"
Hi Robbie :) I love love love your writing so no surprises that I'm back! As always, I will review as I read. 1.I love the description you give of ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter One: Cynthia, Volunteers
Hi there! Here to review your chapter this evening as I was captivated by the title 'Network of Keys'! You should totally name this piece that. I will review as ...
Sep 15, 2013
