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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Mallinda Collins

    Hello there my fabulous friend! As you're new literary agent, I thought I would come and give you a little more encouragement and confidence to make this a NOVEL. The ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Network of Keys Chapter 3: Ky, First Words

    Me again. Here to serve another fantastical review sandwich for team red! Things I liked; I love that you're writing from the dog's point of view. It's a fresh idea ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Network of Keys Chapter 2: Cynthia, Coming Out of the Closet

    Hello there! I remember writing a review for the first chapter of this novel so I'm excited to be back for more! :D Here to represent the red team on ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Assassin

    Hello there! I'm back! I will provide the most scrumptious review sandwich that you have ever seen/gobbled up. First things first, the things I liked; I love your opening line. ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Part One Edited

    Hello there Crystal. I know you are no longer participating in the review day proceedings but I see there no reason why you shouldn't receive some first class reviews. I ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Illusion - Prologue

    Hello there! Here to represent the red team on this amazing review day! I will provide the most scrumptious review sandwich that you have ever seen/gobbled up. First things first ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Narrative Re: Minds are opened only when hearts are opened!

    Hello there ACHU! Here to represent the red team on this perfect review day. I will provide a reviewing sandwich for your essay/article. First things first, the things I liked; ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children of the Forest - Part 1: Prologue

    Hello there Liaya! I love your name! I am here representing the red team of this fine review day. I will give you a beautiful review sandwich for your prologue. ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: For Griffypoo

    Hi Snoink! Here representing the amazing red team on this fine review day :) I will present a delicious review sandwich for your chapter. First off, the things I liked; ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Does Fear Evoke Love? Or is it the Other Way Round?

    Hello there! Here to review your work for this review day! I am here representing team red and at your service. I will do you a delightful review sandwich :) ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The thing about dying.

    Good evening! Here to review your short story for this review day. I will be representing the ever present reds :) I will do you a lovely review sandwich. First ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Perfectly Content- College Essay

    CAILEY! Happy Review Day Opposition Blue! Here to take a look over your college essay. Here we go! “The place where I am perfectly content is actually not a place ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shades: Episode One, Act Four "Super Freaks"

    Back! Let's dive straight into it. 1.Oh goody...I like the sisters. 2.A change of clothes!? That's rather generous! 3.WOAH! How is Eddie in the photo?!?! I need to know now! ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shades: Episode One, Act Three "Super Freaks"

    Hi Robbie :) I love love love your writing so no surprises that I'm back! As always, I will review as I read. 1.I love the description you give of ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Network of Keys Chapter One: Cynthia, Volunteers

    Hi there! Here to review your chapter this evening as I was captivated by the title 'Network of Keys'! You should totally name this piece that. I will review as ...

    Sep 15, 2013


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia