Okuro

Ha, a paradox indeed. ;P Thank you for the review.

Thanks. I fixed it.

She hanged herself to escape him, but he pushed her to that point.

I know but wouldn't it flow better without it?

Oh okay and no problem at all. : )

Ah, right. I'll fix that too. Thanks again!

Thank you. : ) It does help, I'll fix it right now.

Thanks for the advice. I'll try and fix it. : )

No problem. Haha yeah I saw that, oh well. : P

Thank you. : )

Thank you. I'll try and see if I can make it longer. : )

Exactly. : ]

Your welcome. Oh, that's a bit disappointing, but who know maybe one day you will be able to turn it into a complete song. : )

It's written in the point of view of someone who admires another person from afar and can no longer take it and murders them. I guess the point of view ...

Actually I did sort of write it from a stalkers point of view. You're the first person to get it right. Thanks. : )